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for Dancer in a Daydream

by LadyPhoenix99

schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I had a friend tell me once that I was like the master of suspense lol. I always had her guessing what would happen next. I think I have since made attempts to continue that in my writing lol.
Adair and Blake both accept your apology though they realize their own actions were at fault for the thought to begin with lol^_^
The open sincereity between Adair and Aurora are what I like the most about them. They both have a tenderness to them that they try to keep back from some people, but can't hide from each other. And thanks about the comment on the 3-some. That was the first I had ever written anything like that so I wasn't sure how it would come out lol. Glad you liked it. Hope you were able to cool down, I know the heat can be on a person ~_^
person LadyYuna
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
your story is really good. I didn't expect it to turn out that ...beautiful! When I first read the story I thougt about Blake and Adair: "Oh no, what are they gonna do with poor Aurora? They'll hurt or kill her for sure." He, he, now I apologize to them (well, especially to Adair ^^). But I love the tension that built up between them, that was hot! I also love the conversation between Adair and Aurora. They were honest and open to each other and they were their real selves, without any "disguise". That was really sweet.
The threesome was HOT(!!), and the sex scenes between Aurora and Adair was special, because they loved each other, there was even more hotness, mixed with love, great!! ^^

Awww, now I have to cool myself down, 1. from your story (hehe) and 2. from the heat outside (ugh)! ^_^
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am really glad you liked it ^_^ Thanks! I am still amazed where my dreams tend to take me sometimes lol
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love that! So romantic. That guy must be a millionaire or something.
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wouldn't doubt it if he is exactly the same Adair from Spellbound lol. He, unlike myself, was apparently just really good at managing his money XP. Of course, not having anyone to really spoil also saves money too lol. Now he gets to spend it all on her if she lets him *smirk*

I am glad you liked! Thanks for reading! ^_^
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww that was beautiful! Hehehe you'll have to do Blake next.
person kichido
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness. This is a really great story. I loved how you kind of led on from the beginning that Adair was her man, but man. Suspence like crazy. I loved it.
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, are those three who I think they are? lol. I love it! Please update soon!
person Lady Phoenix
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hehe You caught me ^_^

I love my Spellbound characters too much to let them go. This particular story just didn't go with the Spellbound series as it has nothing to do with it lol. It was a dream I had that wouldn't quit pestering me XD I have it all written just doing some last minute edits before posting them all lol
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww now I remember Aurora and Adair. They're Angel's guardians aren't they? Hehehe how cute!
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