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Darn you for not writing more...darn you!!!

Please continue this story.After I read it,I was depressed for a week.No lie.My sister read it and it depressed her too.Please don't make this the end of Charlie and Wonka.It's the most beautifully written fanfic I've ever read.

*blows nose and rubs eyes* gah, you made me cry. Again. I bawl everytime I read this, but I still come back reguarly. I love torturing Willy, horrible as I am. heh, I love angst in ALL forms.

And I like how they didn't get their happy ending, it's so cliche that everything always ends with hearts and roses. So I was very pleased that it didn't.

You nearly had me crying at the end... Good fic.

So sad, but very well written though. There was a perfect measure of flashbacks to give enough detail of the situation while not taking away from the plot or being too distracting. The only character I think needed a bit more work was Sarah. She seemed a bit flat and inconsequential. Although she was a minor character, I think she could have been developed a bit more even if we don’t ever see her (she just kind of appears and disappears from the plot). While I realize this is probably complete, I do wish that something could be done to save Willy – I guess I’m just a sucker for happy endings. (Perhaps a sequel: hope)

...wow, I'm not even sure what to say. This is hardly my first time reading this marvelous story of yours, but it is the first time I've managed to remember to leave a review. :] It hurts to read this story, it does. And re-reading it... oh, it's even more deliciously painful the second time around, now that I know the cause of all of Wonka's pain.

It was wonderfully thought out, and I applaud you for that. The ending is tragic, and the fluffy side of me wants you to write a sequel, with the both of them somehow achieving that happy ending, but another part of me just loves this one. It seems fitting, somehow, with a finality that irritates me beyond belief, and yet I love it all the same. Keep up the brilliant work!

that was sooo wonderfully misrable the second time.

i belive you should rewrite the ending make it happy

Oh my GOD, that's SAD!!!! *clutches heart* Beautifully written, really it was...but oh so terribly sad...so sad. I want with all my might to hug Willy...and hit Charly in the back of the head.

What an adventure it would be to send Charly after willy in the other boat...to bring him back...but...your story, not mine.

Devinely sorrowfull.

Never Stop Writing.

~Aden Diction
-!-Addiction-!-

it made my soul bleed it was so good!!!!

(oops* i have no soul :-)

This story needs another chapter... And a happy ending... *sob* It's so sad. Please say you'll make it end well (and possibly r-rated :P) Mail me if you ever update?