rate_review Reviews

i loved chapters thirteen and fourteen! when will there be more? the punishment scene almost made me cry! can't wait for fifteen to come!

Ashley

I had forgotten about this story. rivendell who is also reading pm'd me telling me another chapter had been added. Alexandra seems to be more accepting of Erik and it seems he wants to be gentler with her. Hope he continues to treat her as a woman should be treated. You attract more flies with honey than with vinegar. He should show her his romantic side not only the beastly side.

I finally got to read the next chapter. I do think Erik ought to look at what he is doing. Does he think he will be happy with a woman who is frightened out of her wits and only submits to him out of fear? He above all people should no that beatings like he gave Alexandra only breed hate and comtempt. That isn't what he wants. He needs to change his tactics.

Please write more soon!! My computer has been down and it was sooooo nice to come back to new chapters!!!!!!! I'm so happy right now lol

anyway, now that my break down is over. Kepp it up and write more soon. I love it, and I'm glad Erik seems to be caring a bit more more her, and doesnt just want her there for sex.

Cant wait for more

hello,

The story is a little hard to read but impossible to refuse. It's one of those stories that you just can't turn away from. You're dying to find out when Erik is going to either see reason or pay for what he's done.

I just have a few questions...

Do you even like Erik?

Have you had any bad relationships similar to this one in the past?

Do you have a lot of anger?

What inspired you to write the story?

Just curious...

I'm a writer too, but not like you. My Eriks are like the ones in the movie except not murderous anymore. please don't tell anyone else about my review. just write back and tell me what you thought about it and answer my questions.

The story is different than anything I've ever read, and that's why I can't ignore it. Keep writing it!

rivendell

I just finished reading your story and it is truly amazing. I sincerely hope that you continue the story and dont keep my waiting too long for the next chapter. =]

I have recently heard that Reviews are becoming a problem namely with never ever ever being done... Well in that case I am writing reviews for all the stories that I read read to tell you how much I apprecheate and do LOVE your writing you are actually on a book marked list that I check every day and get VERY excited when I see new postings... with that said I must slip to the obligatory I WANT NEW CHAPTERS DAMN YOUS!!!!

I hope you update soon, it'd be nice. This is a very dark Erik, still sexy, but very dark... Erik has played the violin and sang for Alexandria, will you have Erik make her dance for him???? That'd be an interesting scene.

anywho, i hope you write more, (sorry i havn't updated sooner either, (im kinda lazy lol, so when i re-read the chapters i decided to be a good person and review lol) and i PROMISE, if you update soon, I'll uPdate religiously..lol, no i am not abouv bribery)

I'v talked to much..lol..more please.

I do hope Erik redeems himself soon. He is becoming quite a pervert. I wouldn't have thought Erik would be so horrlble to a woman. I guess all those years without a woman then the rejection by Christine has put him over the edge. He has learned all sorts of nasty things hasn't he? Pervert. I still love him anyway. Pervert or saint I do love my Erik.

LOL, i cried when i saw two chapters up =)

this is an awesome story, please write more soon