rate_review Reviews

very well done and well writen despite the few spelling errors. You portrayed both characters very well and I can totally see this relation ship...hah, I love Jerlaxle ^_^ I would love to see this continue as well. Though, I know how hard it can be to continue things, heh...Im just glad I finally found a GOOD FR fan fic ^.=.^

nice..i like where this is going. hehe good for him, having his way with Jarlaxle. :P

Very well written. ^^ They are both in character. I loved the conversations between the two. I think the way Jarlaxle acted remaind true to what he would really due if he liked Arty. hehe. That sneaking want it all drow. Overall, this was fun and sexy. Please continue..i dont believe that is the end? I want to see Arty. come to Jarlaxle freely hehe..yeah right. :P But, it would be hot to see a relationship form. They have always been my favorite, although I'm also a D/A fan as well.