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March 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sweet. Oral.
They're very funny, too. I like the smatterings of character you've got here, and the flock of bats? what a great touch.
They're very funny, too. I like the smatterings of character you've got here, and the flock of bats? what a great touch.
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November 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
For a while, you even manage to emulate Pratchett's writing style, which is impressive. This does break down somewhat as sexy times start happening, but it remains well written. The only major problem was that you used she and her too often. This began to get confusing sometimes.
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December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So here I was, re-reading this lovely little tidbit of a story for the I-don't-know-how-manyth** time, when it suddenly occurred to me... have I never reviewed it? But surely I must have, I thought to myself. I've read it again and again, I've recommended it in my profile and everything... Never? Not ever did I tell this author how much I appreciate their fic?
Let me rectify that oversight, posthaste. In an internet landscape that often has little to offer someone like myself who is both an avid Pratchett fan as well as an voracious fanfiction reader, I am always thrilled to stumble across good Discworld stories; much less INCREDIBLE Discworld smutlets, of which this is a wonderful example.
I've shipped Polly/Mal since the first time I picked up 'Monstrous Regiment', and I probably always will. Imagine my dismay when I discovered what a dearth of fics there were to be found; it sadly occupies a very small niche in the fanfiction world. Your writing here is so (to borrow a term from Lewis Carroll) "frabjous" that I find myself searching madly for the proper terms to describe your greatness. It shines through quite apparently that you have given the source material more than just a passing glance, and your grasp of the character's personalities is so spot-on throughout that I'm left with a happy, satisfied smile by the end.
It doesn't hurt any that the sex it hot, either. ;)
Again, I just wanted to make sure you knew that someone out here loves this story as much as humanly possible, and to give you a hearty thanks being the one to write it. Keep up the good work!
**('Manyth' is, of course, not a real word; and should never be used by anyone ever.)
Let me rectify that oversight, posthaste. In an internet landscape that often has little to offer someone like myself who is both an avid Pratchett fan as well as an voracious fanfiction reader, I am always thrilled to stumble across good Discworld stories; much less INCREDIBLE Discworld smutlets, of which this is a wonderful example.
I've shipped Polly/Mal since the first time I picked up 'Monstrous Regiment', and I probably always will. Imagine my dismay when I discovered what a dearth of fics there were to be found; it sadly occupies a very small niche in the fanfiction world. Your writing here is so (to borrow a term from Lewis Carroll) "frabjous" that I find myself searching madly for the proper terms to describe your greatness. It shines through quite apparently that you have given the source material more than just a passing glance, and your grasp of the character's personalities is so spot-on throughout that I'm left with a happy, satisfied smile by the end.
It doesn't hurt any that the sex it hot, either. ;)
Again, I just wanted to make sure you knew that someone out here loves this story as much as humanly possible, and to give you a hearty thanks being the one to write it. Keep up the good work!
**('Manyth' is, of course, not a real word; and should never be used by anyone ever.)
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September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's always quite pleasant to see some more Pratchet fanfiction out there. Welcome to the scene. There are about three of us, the lights don't work, and you need a pass to go to the bathroom.
Have a nice day.
Have a nice day.