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July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great fic! I only wish it had been longer! I want more detail!
I feel like the first part is totally taken from the book. Shouldn't that be mentioned? I like where you decide to then take it, wit the 'examination.'
I feel like the first part is totally taken from the book. Shouldn't that be mentioned? I like where you decide to then take it, wit the 'examination.'
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January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I have to say that of all the four (ONLY FOUR?! What is wrong with the world?!) Ender's Game fanfics on aff.net, yours is by far the best! Yours is most canon. You keep Ender and Peter in character, and I can actually see this happening in the fic, and your fic is intelligent and not cheesy.
Thank you!
I only wish this fic was longer, and that you had described Ender's mix of pain and pleasure in more detail. this fanfic is inspiring! I hope to write some Ender's Game fanfics and add to the meager fanfics for this series. This pairing, Peter/Ender, is excellent. :)
Thank you for a lovely fic!
Thank you!
I only wish this fic was longer, and that you had described Ender's mix of pain and pleasure in more detail. this fanfic is inspiring! I hope to write some Ender's Game fanfics and add to the meager fanfics for this series. This pairing, Peter/Ender, is excellent. :)
Thank you for a lovely fic!