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February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww, isn't there a "Subscribe" button anywhere?! I LOVE your stories! Mixes of cuteness and angst.
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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooh, idle hands is my favorite!
love it!
<333
I do love a hot shota story!
love it!
<333
I do love a hot shota story!
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As always, when I read something of yours, I find myself wanting MORE. I liked the last one best. It reminded me of someone and I think I almost know what he means. It was the sort of story that I like best... They're both shy and unsure, but very much into each other and things turn out beautifully.
The end was slightly confusing, though. I read it as from Wonka's perspective, but the end implied that it was actually Charlie's. "If we got caught, he would be the one persecuted." Did it change perspectives with no warning? Did I just miss something?
The first one... The themes don't bother me. I'm glad Veruca is happy. But what she did to poor Willy... Ouch. I like how, even when they're not the focus, you've got Wonka and Charlie paired.
In the third/fourth, I like how our Charlie brought the other for Wilder-Wonka. It was rather a sweet thing for him to do and I can totally see that Charlie/Willy pairing, even if I prefer the newer one.
The second one... I read it a while back on dA. I remember liking it then, though I didn't reread it.
I should write more. .-. My muse/proofreader abandoned me, but I may have found another. I'll get him (funny to me how they're both guys....) started on reading it next I see him and see if he'll take over. I'm much more inspired to write when I'm writing for someone and the community is apparently not enough...
Your stories have bitten with me fangirlism once more, so I shouldn't find it too hard to slip back into things. <3
The end was slightly confusing, though. I read it as from Wonka's perspective, but the end implied that it was actually Charlie's. "If we got caught, he would be the one persecuted." Did it change perspectives with no warning? Did I just miss something?
The first one... The themes don't bother me. I'm glad Veruca is happy. But what she did to poor Willy... Ouch. I like how, even when they're not the focus, you've got Wonka and Charlie paired.
In the third/fourth, I like how our Charlie brought the other for Wilder-Wonka. It was rather a sweet thing for him to do and I can totally see that Charlie/Willy pairing, even if I prefer the newer one.
The second one... I read it a while back on dA. I remember liking it then, though I didn't reread it.
I should write more. .-. My muse/proofreader abandoned me, but I may have found another. I'll get him (funny to me how they're both guys....) started on reading it next I see him and see if he'll take over. I'm much more inspired to write when I'm writing for someone and the community is apparently not enough...
Your stories have bitten with me fangirlism once more, so I shouldn't find it too hard to slip back into things. <3
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March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's fascinating how, when you write a story, it seems to not need the intimate portions - they act as a catalyst to the mind games you play with each of the character, for ill or not. And that's what really draws me to reading your stories. I have to confess that I can't read too much too soon - each chapter of each story is as a world unto its own, a candy perhaps, if you'll pardon the pun, that should be savored, fully understood, its taste memorized, sensationalize, before consuming and moving on to the next. Though sometimes the titles can be suspect, I can trust that each story will be memorable. In one fashion...or another. Mostly in the best ways.