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for Zero Hour

by lordoberon

schedule January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Gah, I wanted to respond to your reviews SO BADLY but AFF doesn't have that function and your email is hidden so I suppose this is the next best option (it helps that I really love this fic. ;D). Yes, I love it.

I wanted to address two of the questions/points you brought up in my Narnia fics. One was about the Telmarines and Spanish. According to the sources I have, the Telmarines were originally Spanish pirates who found their way into Narnia through a cave. Hence, the Spanish wouldn't be too much of a stretch as a sort of 'courtly' language or something – plus, in the Prince Caspian movie at least, most if not all the Telmarines who have spoken lines have a very definite Spanish accent.

As for your question about whether or not Fireside Mistletoe fits into a larger continuity, that's a yes. I'm working on a much longer fic for that pairing and I wrote Mistletoe to fit into that continuity. I'll eventually have it posted here once I've written more of it. I'm also very flattered that you liked my fics so much. <3 You're very talented yourself! XD

Yeah, there's not enough fic on this site for Narnia, much less anything other than the Pevensie incest (which I don't particularly like), and Caspian/Peter is a pairing that so deserves more love.
person Safir84
schedule May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story you’ve got here, I loved it! And it was my second time reading a fic with this particular pairing, as well! Anyway, the plot’s great and so was the character portrayal and character interaction too, of course! Everything was also well written and the smut was totally steamy and very nicely described indeed!

Now, I’m off to read the sequel, see ya!

schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
holy smack
that was hot
drove me crazy thinking about
good job can't wait to read the other story
:)
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
enjoyed this a lot! *HOT* fans self lol goes off to see if there is a sequel XD
only thing wrong was no lube? *shudders*
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!! Very realistic, improbable without going out of character. Only problem I have- no lube. You have to use lube, even if it's as simple as fifteen seconds of head beforehand. It's not perfect but it's infinitely preferable to going in dry.
Other than that, brilliant story!
schedule November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love how Edward is described as beautiful and graceful yet hes still the top! i do think you use 'hard' too much in the beginning chapters though. im gonna read the sql now!
person andrea87
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hm I enjoyed this fic. Edward/Jacob is my otp. Loved the sex scenes. Very "intense"
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow....that was breathtaking! I love that pairing! In the books i wondered how it was gonna work out with Bella being Jacob's mate and Edwards love...I am hoping they all share :) but that probably wont happen :( But at least in fics like this it does ;) This was entirely too good and I definately want a sequel!
person Shiauko
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yum. It was a pairing I knew SOMEONE would do eventually. And I guess Edward found his belt?
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If you can't decide you could have them switch roles, although that might make the story longer. Anyway, this is a great story. (I almost constantly check to see if its updated!)
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