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Edward. I feel like it wouldn't feel as good for Jacob because Edward isn't warm, but it would feel great for Edward because Jacob is so hot.

Hun, I'm gonna say Edward on top. *looks around* Reasons? I read another Edward/Jacob recently and Jacob topped. So... I'd kinda like to see something different. But in this story, Jacob seems more of a bottom to me than a top. But hey, it's your story.

I loved it by the way; this is one of my favorite non canon ships (Next to Edward/Jasper and Jasper/Jacob.). So I can't wait to see more of this in the future!

Viridian Kat.

Why don't you just try putting one on the bottom and then the other to see which one sounds better. On one hand, Jacob should be on top because he is bigger physically, but on the other hand, Edward should be on top because he is older. I can;t really decide, because I think both would be good on either top or bottom. Why not write both?

*drools* Hun, keep it up! I absolutely love it! *thinks hard for a moment* Is someone going to walk in on them? I'd find it terribly amusing if Sam did... >.< My head is being filled by plot bunnies again. But anyways, I love it and I can't wait to see some more!

MORE!

Ne! Don't end it there! I just HAVE to know what happens next! By the way... I'm hoping that Jacob isn't turned and that Edward doesn't kill him (it's rather obvious that Edward is going to drink some of Jacob's blood). But you'll need to explain what will happen when this does! As werewolves are designed to hunt and kill vampires, they'd most likely be immune to the venom (so it will have no effect on Jacob); and secondly, they heal incredibly fast, so this naturally means that they're able to recover blood quickly.

All in all, it does make for a reliable donor; as long as you don't completely drain the werewolf to the point of death.

Looking forward to more soon, and hoping that this helped, even if it is just slightly, or that you enjoyed it.

Viridian Kat.

I soooo WANT MORE. UPDATE IT.

Finally, a slash version of Twilight! I've been waiting for someone to write one and it seems you are the first person to do so. You have my thanks! Amazing, fluid story. will you continue it? If so, I'll be on the sidelines rooting for you. Edward and Jacob... yummy! Please, continue!

YES! God bless you! I've been looking for this pairing for a bit. Your beautiful....lol, cant wait for another chapter!

i really like this!!! please keep writing