rate_review Reviews

Awesome sequel, I really liked it, well, of course, hehe! It was just a good, if not a little bit than Zero Hour, I believe! Everything was well written and well portrayed and the smut was hot and very nicely described, too and the ending was very fitting, bitter-sweet, mind you but, awesome nonetheless! And now I’ll be off to read the sequel to this one, as well, see ya! Kudos!

Perfection! Gotta love two hot men.

this story is totally awesome and i really hope you write that sequel! good luck!

Hey it really good please pu5t up the sequel soon

i love you,
in a non stalker way
this was pretty much perfect
please write a sequel and best wishes in doing so

sad ending but great story
there aren't enough good stories of this pairing
thanks for the awesome smexiness ^_^

Again, a very well written story. A couple of... plot holes? Not quite. No one should have been able to sneak up on them, Edward should have been able to sense them the same way he senses Charlie approaching. Likewise, when Jacob transforms, the werewolves have hivemind- it'd be hard for the others not to find out. The blond peeking over the wall and asking to join was an entertaining thought, though. As is the broken stall door, which will probably never hang right again. Boy's bathrooms are gross, though. Probably no one will notice.
Lastly, there's no real need to be careful of leaving marks on Edward- no blood, no bruises, no hickies.
If it weren't for my maddening habit of picking at details, the story would have been perfect. Looking forward to the possible bdsm sequel, and wondering what kind of straps can contain a vampire. >.>

The family finds out.

It's really that simple, where to go from here. Strangely enough, I wish the books were like this. If someone had told me that there were Twilight fangirls out there who were also yaoi-addicts, I'd have read the books sooner. To hell with Bella. Edward/Jacob forever.

nice! lust-stricken boys in bathrooms are always fun!

Write a sequel, pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase!!!