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March 4, 2019 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story - it started aggressively and ended sweetly.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pretty dang good,wishing for a new part.
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very sensual, I hope it does not stay at it`s current length, a few more chapters wouldn`t be half-bad, and you could even implement some plot
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April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was an interesting story. I've always wanted to see an A/H NC-17 fic, and so far haven't found any. I have almost given up on ever finding one, so today I was surprised to stumble upon yours. I must admit that non-consensual sex isn't my cup of tea, but I'm glad that it turned into consensual sex along the way. It was nicely written. A/H forever. :D
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice oneshot, I hope you write more for this category. I'd like to see the relationship develop. This is probably the only way Artemis could, initially, get Holly to agree. Just one point, try not to overuse the same adjectives so close together, it makes the writing lose power.