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by Isilven

schedule August 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely commend you for writing a fanfic based on the Gemma Doyle trilogy. I loved the books, and even though I hate to 'spoil' most literary gems like this with fanfiction, the series had so much potential for alternative plotlines. This is definitely a great interpretation of that potential. I especially like how you mentioned the situation with Felicity's father, and in fact, there's room there for some elaboration as to her feelings about it. Beautiful characterizations, really. :)

-CR
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