rate_review Reviews

I loved this. It was amusing at parts, and extremely sexy. Have you thought about writing a sequel to this? I think that'd be pretty cool.

i loved this story! the way you wrote jacob was so like him..if these events occured! lol i think you should write a follow up when jake isnt in heat anymore and he sees edward again. good story!

Oh my god! PLEASE never delete this story! I fucking love it! It's hot as hell and amazingly funny at the same time. MMM. The Sam/Jacob was surprisingly hot, but ohh, the Edward/Jacob was EVEN hotter! Yum! Yum!

I really love dthe humor too. It made me laugh out loud several times. I especially loved the part about "you wouldn't think a six foot five man could drown in a creek." hahaHA!

Edward and Jacob was sooo hot. The blowjob was really intense, and the sex too. Ooh, ooh. I wish there was more Edward/Jacob on this site. It's such a fantastic pairing.

Excellent job! I'm favoriting this one! Yay!

I freaking loved this story!!!! I don't know what else to say about it... It was really good!

I... don't enjoy the twilight series, but I think your story just made me want to check out the books from my library. Good job-- I hope it's not jsut a oneshot

Wow O.o

I have a few things to say XD

First off, Its highly unlikely that the vampires will like the smell of a werewolf in heat and second, if Jacob doesnt like the smell of Edward on a daily basis it doesnt seem like it would change even though he's in heat XD.

ok im just being picky now you can ignore me :D


I liked it though, very smexy

THere needs to be more Edward/Jacob stories on here! That was incredibly hot!

This story...was so...HOT!!! You have to make more!!! I loved it!