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November 10, 2018 at 12:00 AM
Please write more.
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June 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow, intense!
I would love a chapter from Peter's point of view....;D
waiting for an update now...
I would love a chapter from Peter's point of view....;D
waiting for an update now...
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August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Please update. Can you explain more about what's going on in Peter's mind as Susan's doing all this stuff? Poor Susan sounds like she's going out of her mind with lust. Does she want a relationship with Peter or just sex with him? How's that going to effect the rest of the family? Get into all that stuff, the psychology is really interesting.
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December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not to pressure you in busy times, but - please update! This is great!
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June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOHH! Chapter 2 has such an intriguing end! PLEASE write more! This is hot.
I love you describe the kisses as like dances. That is tantalizing and hot, and cute, too.
Peter and Susan. Mmm. More, more!
Very good inner mind of Susan, you've got the torn combined with the need. Nice. And I like Peter's reaction...:D
I love you describe the kisses as like dances. That is tantalizing and hot, and cute, too.
Peter and Susan. Mmm. More, more!
Very good inner mind of Susan, you've got the torn combined with the need. Nice. And I like Peter's reaction...:D
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June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! More, please more!
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May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a great start...I hope you'll write more!