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Unfortunately this story remains unfinished, however for those of you who wish for more of this story look no further than this:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4308202/1/Dearly-Beloved
The story continues here up to chapter 7

This is starting out to be a wonderful story, and you have me intrigued...what won't they tell Lucy??
And why won't Tumnus like it??

Please tell me you haven't abandoned this tale! I know that life gets overwhelming at times, but writing
can often be a great catharsis for the stress we come up against during the twelve hours of awake time.

I hope that you do choose to update soon, you have a true gift.

Oh please tell me that you plan on finishing this story. I is so very wonderful. I feel as though I am there when I read it. The details are very in depths and the vocabulary is quite nice.

Please update this story! It is one of the best of my favorite pairings that I've read and would really like to read more!

Also, just as a side note, why is it that all the Lucy/Mr.Tamnus end (or stop writing) before they get good? So please continue? pretty please? sugar on top? LoL :)

Oh wow this is shaping up to be a horribly beautiful and sweet story already!

DEFINITELY one of the best Tumnus/Lucy fics I've ever read - honestly believable and not a cliche in sight! Lovely to see a more realistic portrayal of Tumnus instead of reverting to a geeky, embarrased cliche around Lucy (perhaps just the tiniest bit of suspension of disbelief required as Lucy can apparently feel tickling through a steel-boned corset - I work in the UK's largest proper corset shop and this is a charming mental image...but please don't think I'm nit-picking, I love any and every mention of corsetry!) Brilliant story, please continue! :)

good story so far