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March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
TEASE!!!!!!!! you have to update! it was hella good and I need more! seriously, waiting all this time is soooooooooooooo hard!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Good job Flora, it was a great addition to your story.
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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, your plot is meaningless, your portrayal of the characters is juvenile, the idea behind the fic is pointless, stupid, and completely unrealistic, and the writing style is generic at best.
Which means that this fanfic is even better literature than the series it's based on! Congratulations!
Which means that this fanfic is even better literature than the series it's based on! Congratulations!
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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Heyheyheyheyhey... that cliffy was really not cool!!!! Oh well I think that I'll live.... maybe... LOVE IT!!! Can't wait for the next chapter
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March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome!!! You have to keep writing it, its my fave one here!
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February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great job so far. Hope you'll be able to wright more soon.
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February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story.The love,passion,the mystery of the dark secrets.SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO continue this story it rawks.I just want to keep reading and reading it.
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i will honestly admit that i have never read any of the twilight books but if they were like this i so would. i fucking loved every word of it!!!! and while i never read twilight, my friends did tell me about vampires sparkling in the sun, lol. so i was really stoked to see that in the last/latest chapter! i didn't even have to as for it!! ;D also, i laughed at the choosing plays part. this story is equal parts comedic, romantic and sad. but the good humor keeps me wanting to read it. great job
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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story! I can't wait for an update!
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January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is officially the first Twilight fic that made me laugh out loud for the right reasons! I think I've read your stories in the past too, and liked them, so I was hopeful already when I first stumbled across this. And I was not disappointed.
This story succeeds in aceing two major aspects that I most often find lacking in fanfiction: humor and proper plot. My personal opinion is that convincing humor is much more difficult to write than a convincing sex scene, so well done. And plot-wise I appreciate the fact that there aren't all too many of the typical leaps and short cuts that one often comes across in stories where the author simply wants to get to the "good bits".
So well done! I'll be chacking back soon in hopes of a new chapter.
This story succeeds in aceing two major aspects that I most often find lacking in fanfiction: humor and proper plot. My personal opinion is that convincing humor is much more difficult to write than a convincing sex scene, so well done. And plot-wise I appreciate the fact that there aren't all too many of the typical leaps and short cuts that one often comes across in stories where the author simply wants to get to the "good bits".
So well done! I'll be chacking back soon in hopes of a new chapter.
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December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not only is this the first Twilight fanfic I have read and actually really enjoyed, but it is also the first fic I have ever read that has an OC whom I actually like.
Well done. I do hope to see more of this soon.
Well done. I do hope to see more of this soon.