rate_review Reviews

Alright, so i'm going to start off with saying that without exagerration this is the best fanfiction i've ever read, proven by the fact that i can never seem to read any which have more than one chapter, and i enjoyed this one so much that i had to read ahead! Its VERY good indeed, and its exactly the kind of thing i was looking for, i mean, the one thing to make the twilight series perfect for me would have been to make Edward involved with a guy, so....genius!!! Seriously, i think it's awesome, and you should continue it!! I'm a total fan now!! Please please please write more, i keep visiting again and again hoping that a new chapter would have arrived! My brother even thinks its interesting!! Good job and keep on it! Please!!!!!!!!!

ok... normally i dont beg... but i have to like stop myself to not check this site so i dont have to re-read your story for the umpteenth time! but come on! you gotta update... it's killin me! i love this story...

feel special... never beg... am begging now

please please please please please....
ty!

omfg... it's amazing!!! you need to hurry it up and update like pronto ma'am! please! Lol, i've just finished the first book and have been uber excited for the movie coming out... but something was kinda lacking. I like the Edward you've depicted... and this may be blasphemous but, i dont know how thrilled I am with the Bella they picked for the movie...

Sorry if affended... i like your story much better!

Keep it up... hurry and finish your temple burning and get back to writing!!! love it!

Hello, just wanted o say your story rocks =) A bit unusual to have OC slash in this fandom but you are an amazing writer and I truly enjoyed myself. I hope you will write more stories in this and other fandoms for me to read XD

I really love this story. I wasn't expecting it to be so good, only because I've never considered reading an Edward/OC story, but this one surprised me. I can't wait for more of Edward and his awesome.

I LOVE this! Please continue this soon. I usually don't like reading fanfics with OCs but I really like this. My only complaint is that with the third person perspective, it can get confusing as to who is talking to who. Making that a little more clearer would make this even better. I REALLY do love this.

Just finished reading the first chapter - loved it. So much better than Twilight, hmm, vampire slash. I wonder, is David replacing Bella and is your story going to continue in Twilight's direction, sort of? I guess I'll find out.

Smile,
Lady D

*snickers* Love their bickering, very entertaining. Kinda puzzled at the eye-colour changing thing, hope David ain't slowly morphing into a Gary-Stu.

More chapters to read,
Lady D

Hm, magical powers hm? I'll forgive your for that, I like this story too much anyways.

Smile,
Lady D