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EPIC WIN!

I love all your Artemis Fowl stories (they're rather amusing and much more enjoyable to read than any of the others, prepubescent fantasies and un-betaed grammatical spell-checkless horror... not worth the internet space or time it took to think them up... that *they* are). Yours are lovely and well thought out and rather realistic to be sure. (I am not nearly so harsh on fanfiction as I sound, but if I can't see it happening outside total OOCness, or am, rather easily I must admit, put entirely off by misspellings and lack of good grammatical syntax, I much rather wipe its filth of teen mush off the face of the earth.
... I'm looking at you, Twilight fans. xD)

I could see his mom being totally calm and collected about it, and the split-second relieved look before she said her last line there and his expression plummeted like a cut marionette. I could see Juliet ribbing her brother (and him turning some of that right back at her) about terrorizing his lover and managing to get her own way about her own relationships.

All in all, I should stop gushing like I'm half my age and point out the one small error that finally got to the attention of the grammar Nazi in me.
It's a "Lear" jet, not "Leer" jet. Though point in fact, most write it as one word as well, "learjet".
You're welcome to google it or wikipedia or whichever.

I love your writing style and I hope you're planning to make a chapter of Artemis telling his father too.....would love to see how that goes...Although I felt Artemis usiong the word 'queer' was a bit OOC...anywho, update/write soon!

Of course you have to leave us there! As always, I love your writing. I would love to read about their trip to France, and how they keep warm. ;) Maybe even an adventure there? Little adventures that all wind down to him eventually telling his father about Butler and him. ¢¾ Whatever you write, whenever you write it, I'd love to read it. :) Don't keep us waiting too long! (I know, I'm a hipocrite. ¢¾¢¾)

Btw, I wrote that last chapter of my story for you. ^^

I was so surprised to check back today and see this updated, but it was a very wonderful surprise. I re-read this 'verse about two weeks ago, and I really wished for it to continue. And I still do, however I understand about the whole motivation and inspiration thing, so even if you don't continue, I wanted to let you know that this was an extremely enjoyable series to read, not only for the hot sex scene (although that was totally amazing!), but also for the amazing dialogue, wonderful wording and descriptiveness, as well as the growth of the characters throughout the timeline. It truly was a great read, and I know I'll be going back to re-read it in the future when the mood suddenly hits me. I consider this 'verse one of the best AF fics I've read.

Awesome!

Everyone's in character.

I like how you handled the character's reactions to Artemis and Butler's relationship.

The start of the chapter was hilarious, and so was Artemis' snark about telling his father about his romantic relationship with Butler.

Great chapter!

Great story!

Your stories are all so beautifully written but I believe that this pair is really your defining work. The way you have managed to capture each of the characters so perfectly and thrust them - in some cases literally - into territory which they have never explored and yet make it sound as if Eion Colfer himself had written it is literally mind blowing. The beautiful tension between Artemis and Butler makes for a wonderfully constructed fic and I personally am ever so grateful to you for writing this. Please continue this story! Your words are too beautiful to go amiss.

... Finish xD

Rational Intercourse wasn't exactly what I was expecting, but I did enjoy it. And morning-after fics are.. Awesome, so, please, one more chapter? :P

This is fantastic. <3 I really hope you continue this, because I absolutely love it.

Kya, WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER! I love it, DEFINITELY the best Artemis ficcie. ButlerxArtemis OTP! <3 Writewritewrite! <3