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February 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I really enjoyed it, hope to read more from you :)
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September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi Luthien,
I thought this was beautifully written. I wouldn't have guessed English wasn't your first language, and btw, you wouldn't want to read anything by me in German! I love fan fics that are able to keep in canon so perfectly like this one. Your Bella and Edward really acted like two inexperienced kids, which is how the great SM intended it. It was lovely and sexy without getting too graphic. You should write more.
Marie
I thought this was beautifully written. I wouldn't have guessed English wasn't your first language, and btw, you wouldn't want to read anything by me in German! I love fan fics that are able to keep in canon so perfectly like this one. Your Bella and Edward really acted like two inexperienced kids, which is how the great SM intended it. It was lovely and sexy without getting too graphic. You should write more.
Marie
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April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sooooo verrückt ist es auch nicht, von Harry Potter zu Twilight überzugehen. Bei mir ist es übrigens ganz ähnlich. ;)
Und bitte sag mir, dass du lügst und gar nicht aus Deutschland kommst – dein Englisch ist nämlich großartig! :)
Anyway, what I really liked about your story was the tiny things, like Edward calling her „wife“, the bath scene and the tickling. But of course, the rest of it was really, really sweet as well.
I know what you mean… a lot of the thoughts I had on my mind actually turned out to be in Meyer’s books. I swear, that woman can read minds (probably the reason why Edward’s able to do it, too) – that’s how she finished the Twilight series. *lol* And now we’re all having a hard time claiming we were first! ;)
Und bitte sag mir, dass du lügst und gar nicht aus Deutschland kommst – dein Englisch ist nämlich großartig! :)
Anyway, what I really liked about your story was the tiny things, like Edward calling her „wife“, the bath scene and the tickling. But of course, the rest of it was really, really sweet as well.
I know what you mean… a lot of the thoughts I had on my mind actually turned out to be in Meyer’s books. I swear, that woman can read minds (probably the reason why Edward’s able to do it, too) – that’s how she finished the Twilight series. *lol* And now we’re all having a hard time claiming we were first! ;)
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November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Considering this was before you read Breaking Dawn, this was handled beautifully. Great job!
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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story. Thanks for the advice on mine "perfection forever" I'll take you up on that I'm sure. until then i look forward to more of your work!
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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THis was a really great fic! It fits nicely with Breaking Dawn; I feel like you pretty much just filled in the "fade to black" part she didn't write in....ahahaha!
:D This was sexy and sweet at the same time. It wasn't so rampantly sexual as to make me feel both characters were OOC; they were in-character, and this was still hot. :D I love how Edward has to regain control over himself.
Mm, Edward naked in a bathtub...!
:D This was sexy and sweet at the same time. It wasn't so rampantly sexual as to make me feel both characters were OOC; they were in-character, and this was still hot. :D I love how Edward has to regain control over himself.
Mm, Edward naked in a bathtub...!
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
umm.. i liked this. it was good. Although, I love the setting for it in Breaking Dawn.