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June 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I shall follow this story.
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting plot. *sigh* Love the character interaction, as always, But . . .
I did see a few mistakes, mostly with word flow . . . As if words were missing or weren’t in there proper places. There were also a few sentence structure errors, nothing major though.
Get back to me sometime and I’ll go over it with you.
~SFP~
I did see a few mistakes, mostly with word flow . . . As if words were missing or weren’t in there proper places. There were also a few sentence structure errors, nothing major though.
Get back to me sometime and I’ll go over it with you.
~SFP~