rate_review Reviews

Hey great story. I love WOT and want to see some good adult stories. Can you please write more for eg- Rand/Many Aes Sedai, Rand/Moiriane, Rand/Aviendha/Elayne/Min, Rand/Egwene, Mat/Daughter of the nine Moons( I forgot her name). Please write some more stories using the above pairings.

Thanks a lot.

Thanks for the review(s). I admit I feel a bit overdramatic every time I write some dialogue into a sex scene. But it gets to the point where you look back and realise you've gone whole paragraphs without anyone saying anything and feel almost obliged to hit the "" keys. A habit I probably need to break.

Nice to see a new author for the Wheel of Time section. Doubly nice to see a non slash writer. Triply nice because I would never have imagined that pairing.

That being said, and since I've read the rest of your stories there so this could hardly be a criticism against your writing ability, but it would have been nice if you formatted this into paragraphs. You've done so elsewhere so nothing really needs to be said I guess. That and I suppose Rand was a little over dramatic. Certainly nothing like the innocent sheepherder we see early on in the novels. But then again, I sincerely doubt anyone could create a plausible situation where that same 'innocent sheepherder' could get into a sexual situation.

And the quality of the actual scene was very good. Kind of a disjointed review. I'm moving on to your next story so expect a review shortly.