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January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
really good so far hun, looking forward to the next chapter.
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January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!!!!! Finally another chapter!!! OMG i can't tell you how long i've been waiting for this story to be updated!!!! I love this story SO much!!! PLEASE update SOON!!!!! I LOVE it!!!!
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January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oooooooo i am liking this story already hehe, hope you keep it going.
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January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great start, sis!
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December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
really really really good!!! Can't wait for it to be updated! Gonna keep an eye out for it! I just finished the Twilight Series and this story is definitely going to help maintain the high those books give you
Excellent first chapter, very well written and played out. Loved Edward's first "appearance"!
Excellent first chapter, very well written and played out. Loved Edward's first "appearance"!
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December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good job on the story so far and I do hope you find a beta. Correcting the few obvious errors would greatly improve the story and I'm sure you'll get an immense (well, as immense as it can get here) amount of positive feed back. Whether it's through ratings or reviews, both R's are nice in their own way. But anyway, keep up the good work and I do expect another chapter up soon. It's not good to leave your fans waiting you know. ;)
-DRA
-DRA
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December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I like it, curious to see where you'll go with it.
Be careful though, the family we all long to be part of is CullEn, not Cullin ;-)
If you need a beta (and be it only for the minor spelling mistakes, since I am no native speaker), drop me a line at zicke0605(a)vorsicht-bissig.de ...
Luthién
Be careful though, the family we all long to be part of is CullEn, not Cullin ;-)
If you need a beta (and be it only for the minor spelling mistakes, since I am no native speaker), drop me a line at zicke0605(a)vorsicht-bissig.de ...
Luthién