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I was really enjoying this, and then I realized that you had accidently uploaded several chgapters twice. You may want to go back and redo the loading for everything after chapter 15. Waiting for more!

this story is posted under another name. i am a bit confused as to why...

as in did you lose access to the other account, and so reposted under a different name, or is the story being plagiarized? this posting has more chaps and was posted earlier... but i am confused, both stories are the same, word for word.

It is a good story and i can't wait for more...just hoping maybe you could clear up my confusion.

great story - hope there's more to come. i was hesitant to read it, but you grabbed me pretty quickly. just wondering about the weird dbl posting of a few chapters, and hoping there is more story to come. anyway, great fic!

cute start. i like it. though I don't like that she is 15 or at least jasper thinks she is

OMFG²! Chapters dedicated to me! I'm so thrilled and happy that I got to read all of this! but I want more, this isn't enough, of all the storys I read here, yours was the one that I liked the most, and the first thing that I checked when I logged in was your story so... The Alice of your story is just as charming as the one SM introduced to us, and the plot is sooooo... I don't have words! Really, I don't, I'm from Brazil and I can't find the words to describe how much I need you to keep writing this. Is the only story I review and the reason that I created an account here! And really, only 19 reviews? This is CRAZY! I'll definatelly showing this to my TwilightLover friends. They'll love it. Just one question, isn't there a way to review it without needing to be registered? I don't think they will have as much patience as I do. And last thing: Have you considered to post your story at fanfiction.net? It might get you more comments since it's no all sex&adult stuff. People love a Jasper&Alice romance. Anyway, keep it up! I'm totally addicted to this story!

OMFG! I registered here just to review this story! You have do keep writing it, I fell in love with the plot, and you are such and amazing writer that it would be a crime not to continue this fanfiction! Will I have to beg? Seriously, do you plan to continue this story? Cause I just faved it.
Keep it up!
Oh and, kudos, kudos, kudos!

I just read this fic, and I gotta tell ya, I am really enjoying it. Alice/Jasper are my favorite couple! I'm looking forward to read more.

Yay I got a mention! :-) I'm happy that my review made you happy!!
Love love love this chapter, I think I'm falling in love with Jasper a tiny bit haha! I've been converted into a Jasper fan thanks to you. I love how Jasper isn't afraid of hurting Alice, unlike Edward is with Bella (which got really frustrating in SMeyers books!) The dialogue between the two characters flows so well and is so realistic.
On a side note, good for you for writing your own novel. I truly believe you have talent from what I have seen, and I like to think of myself as someone well- read. Good luck with the writing! And please keep up with the fan fic writing too ;-)
Claire

You know, I usually don`t know human Cullen stories at all so I usually skip them. But since I was starting to run out on fanfics and am a serious Jasper addict, I decided to give this story a try. And wow..just wow, I love it! This is seriously the first time I`ve read a human Cullen story which I actually enjoyed.

And that last chapter was so adorable! Exactly the way their first time should have been :D At least it didn`t take Jasper years to find the strength to make love to Alice, unlike Edward and Bella in the books (you don`t want to know how much Edward annoyed me in the books with his whining about now being strong enough to make love with Bella.) xD

Anyway, please keep on writing these wonderful chapters!

squeal!!!!