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by ras

person butabara
schedule July 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You shameless tease!! I want more!!!! Get me all excited and then leave it there. Psh. No bueno.

That was really good though. Great build up. :)
person halesy
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMFG..OMFG that had to be the hottest one shot i have read EVER!!! that was amazing, incredibly hot!!!
person Zilo
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Had me giggling out loud to myself. Very well written and thought out. Hehe... oh yeah... and HOT. :P
person Tinkertease
schedule May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awesome story so far.. keep it up.
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow. never thought anyone would do this. its really good!! add more chapters!!! please!!!
schedule April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More Please!!!
person Bug
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That last line had me chuckling. Funny story. XD
person Jags
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very hot
schedule March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! YOU REALLY HAVE TO ADD ON TO THIS. IT'S REALLY GOOD.
schedule February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was so hot! Great fic!
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