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by ras

schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, cool. I like how you did this, with paragraphs of sex between the conversation.
Nope, still happens!
Priceless.
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey i loved this please please add more :)
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Tell me will there be another chapter? I would love to read more.
person puppydog`
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please continue! This is the one thing I want to see!
person patch138
schedule February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great Job! I really loved that they all stayed in character! Sometimes its hard to do!
person rorarora
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is AWESOME!!! please do more soon!
person Ra1nb0ws0cks
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was the best moresome I've read or Twilight fanfics so far!
person Monica
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahh. Where's chapter 2? Please continue this story.
person ametomoe
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
SAWHEEEET!!! i love it. you tackled like 5 major pairings in one, and made it seem canon! numerable fantabulous kudos for you, dear.
schedule January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hot Damn! That was great! In the begining I was a lil embarased for Alice. LOL. I forgot about Edward for a second there to. That was great. I really enjoyed the story. If you ever decide to continue it that would be a great lil read.
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