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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you guys are too nice to me and my work lol ; )
thank you so much though I have been trying to keep it as un-fairytaleish as possible and closer to reality.
it's good to see that is has paid off and you all seem to be enjoying it!
yes writing that lemon was hard work as I had my boss looking over my shoulder all day and my boyfriend looking over my shoulder all night. evils. lol you have to give kudos to a boyfriend who doesn't make too much of a fuss when you keep them awake all night typing away noisily in bed next to them! if he is reading this that I'M SORRY and I LOVE YOU and I also owe you one when I get this thing finished ;o
at the moment i am actually in a bit of a trifle (yes, a dessert), because i tripped over and sprained one of my wrists and severely bruised the other so typing is painful and slow. i am usually a speedy touch-typist and I have been reduced to two-fingered tapping! it's so slow!
But I am still tapping away single-fingeredly to finish chapter 8, the last chapter in Edward's POV so wish me luck and I will have it up ASAP!
~MrsJasperHale
thank you so much though I have been trying to keep it as un-fairytaleish as possible and closer to reality.
it's good to see that is has paid off and you all seem to be enjoying it!
yes writing that lemon was hard work as I had my boss looking over my shoulder all day and my boyfriend looking over my shoulder all night. evils. lol you have to give kudos to a boyfriend who doesn't make too much of a fuss when you keep them awake all night typing away noisily in bed next to them! if he is reading this that I'M SORRY and I LOVE YOU and I also owe you one when I get this thing finished ;o
at the moment i am actually in a bit of a trifle (yes, a dessert), because i tripped over and sprained one of my wrists and severely bruised the other so typing is painful and slow. i am usually a speedy touch-typist and I have been reduced to two-fingered tapping! it's so slow!
But I am still tapping away single-fingeredly to finish chapter 8, the last chapter in Edward's POV so wish me luck and I will have it up ASAP!
~MrsJasperHale
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January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, so much angst! I loved it! and YESSSSSSSSSS hot hot lemon chapter. I have to say I really loved how you portrayed all the Cullens when facing Edward after the incident. I pictured it kinda different, everyone really being more worried and reassuring than pissed and lecturing, but it actually worked better your way! First time I see a cold Carlisle, a SICK-worried Rosalie, etc. You did an awesome job at their characterization! And the talk between Edward and Bella at lunch was very tense and did not ended up as "I love you Edward-I love you to, Bella" with the rainbow shining and unicorns passing through! It just ended in a kinda ackward and un-resolved status... which is rare in fics where this couple has a difficult situation. I'm loving it!! can't wait for the Lemon-Stravaganza :)
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January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, I almost forgot... THANK YOU FOR DOING IT ON EDWARD'S POV, I was actually just saying it with the hope that you already wrote it as an EPOV, I didn't even knew it wasn't even done. So the fact that you actually wrote it after that made me shed 2 tears! (Yeah, I count them...).
I'm so grateful that you did it that way and you totally nailed it, you did it better than I thought. It was very angsty and emotional, with the self-loathing and shame! it was really good. Keep it up!
I'm so grateful that you did it that way and you totally nailed it, you did it better than I thought. It was very angsty and emotional, with the self-loathing and shame! it was really good. Keep it up!
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January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW, that was amazing! OMG, please let there be another chapter coming up! LOVED IT!!!
Great job!!
ReddTwilight
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Great job!!
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January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ufff.. so goooood! That was real hot. And I hope its not the final chapter, this fic is too frickin' good!
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January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Shame on me as I've read all chapters of it so far without ever reviewing. +_+ The thing is just that I don't want to come up with the usual "great, awesome, brilliant, hot, etc.". Unfortunately, however, my brain's little cells are too delighted and happy about chapter 7 so I'm rather uncreative there... hehe. Sorry. ;)
What fascinates me most is that whenever I (re-)read your story, it truly feels as if it's real... as if Edward and Bella were actually speaking and doing all of this. A lot of other styles make it rather seem as if Edward were on too much Valium and Bella were missing that very Valium since he already took it all. ;) Yours doesn't. Yours is just wonderful. In a really, really good way. Which is really, really good. Which, uhm, shows that my brain cells are really, really dancing happily and brainlessly around because of "Trust me". *lol*
What fascinates me most is that whenever I (re-)read your story, it truly feels as if it's real... as if Edward and Bella were actually speaking and doing all of this. A lot of other styles make it rather seem as if Edward were on too much Valium and Bella were missing that very Valium since he already took it all. ;) Yours doesn't. Yours is just wonderful. In a really, really good way. Which is really, really good. Which, uhm, shows that my brain cells are really, really dancing happily and brainlessly around because of "Trust me". *lol*
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January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You're putting this story together so beautifully that I'm checking for updates way too often. Keep it up and don't be afraid to wind it out. This still has a good few chapters you can crank out.
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January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think that this is a great story. I hope you keep writing. What bothers me most is people who start a great story and then doesn't finish it. I love this story so far. Keep up the good work.
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January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is for all the people that may think that i've finished writing - i'm not! i plan to still add a few more chapters i swear! i love writing!
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January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. I hope you update again soon!
I only have one problem with it, and it is only because I have a few pet peeves when it comes to Jasper, and not the actual story. He already graduated with Emmet and Rosalie, so why would it be odd that he wasn't in the cafeteria? Unless he goes just to see Alice (which who could blame him). Eh, no big, though. At least you never called him Jasper Cullen... that would call for some bitch slappen. haha.
Keep up the great work! I can't wait to see what happens next.
I only have one problem with it, and it is only because I have a few pet peeves when it comes to Jasper, and not the actual story. He already graduated with Emmet and Rosalie, so why would it be odd that he wasn't in the cafeteria? Unless he goes just to see Alice (which who could blame him). Eh, no big, though. At least you never called him Jasper Cullen... that would call for some bitch slappen. haha.
Keep up the great work! I can't wait to see what happens next.