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January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i know that and it pissed me off that he was older than Alice but i wrote him into the story because he's like my favourite character *pokes username*
let's pretend he's repeating a year or he is one year younger shall we? i just like the idea of him being there...
let's pretend he's repeating a year or he is one year younger shall we? i just like the idea of him being there...
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January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
okay i've changed my mind
jasper is always at the cafeteria because....... he visits the school every day so he can have lunch with alice and he drives her to school in the morning.
better? this way we dont have to bullshit ourselves by saying he is younger :)
problemo fixed!
; )
jasper is always at the cafeteria because....... he visits the school every day so he can have lunch with alice and he drives her to school in the morning.
better? this way we dont have to bullshit ourselves by saying he is younger :)
problemo fixed!
; )
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January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!! I love waking up in the morning to new chapters and new reviews!!! Thank you very much for yours btw... And excellant job with this chapter. You really got into Edward's mind here it was very realistic. I felt his pain. I couldn't tear my eyes away, it was SO good
Great Job, can't wait for the next update. And I promise to update "Real" as well, as soon as my zoology hw pile diminishes slightly. (UGH)
Anyway, fantastic job! Keep going!
ReddTwilight
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Great Job, can't wait for the next update. And I promise to update "Real" as well, as soon as my zoology hw pile diminishes slightly. (UGH)
Anyway, fantastic job! Keep going!
ReddTwilight
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January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very well done! I like that you used Jasper, he is very appropriate here considering his abilities. I can't wait for the next chapter, and was so glad that this one ended on a happy note. I'll be looking forward to reading more all. Now I can't wait to get back from zoology! Yeah, all excited!!!!
Great Job
ReddTwilight
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Great Job
ReddTwilight
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January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, please write more and keep feeding my perv and obsessed twilight mind. This is the first fic I read where Edward actually gets to hurt her physically while doing it... not even to think he'll kinda rape her in a GORE-ish way! This is so fuckup and I love it!! please update ASAP, I'll be reading AND reviewing fo'shoo!
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January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The Jasper scene was genius. And I love how you portrayed the confusion, sadness and that emotional turnmoil with Bella. This is good writing! please update soon. I'm dying to see how's EPOV of everything.
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January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
GAH!
I want more chapters, please!!! It's awesome.
I want more chapters, please!!! It's awesome.
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January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG update asap!!! Holy crap REALLY GOOD!!! Got me all excited for the next chapter!!! REALLY LOVE IT!!! Great job!!!!
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January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is fantastic! So well written and completely in-character. I look forward to the next chapter. I loved the cafeteria kiss!
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January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Really good. Update soon, can't wait to see what happens... Love the summary at the beginning. Very Foreshaowy...