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for Learning to Breathe

by andarte

schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my god wow this was a hot hot story. might i suggest you continue this story on further?
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
One of the best Jacob/Bella fics I've read in a while!! Great job on this!!!
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed that. Well done!
schedule April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, I love this, all too often we get stories just like the one SM wrote, I love the variety!!

~Tiffany
schedule April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My body had already began to adjust to him inside of me, though I was well aware his recent werewolf inspired growth was not all in height. That was a detail I was more than willing to explore in full at a later date.
thats one of the best lines!!

Keep it coming!

~Tiffany
schedule April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hehe my captcha words are pursued Swann...lol

anyway, I love this! Please keep it coming, this story could go on a long time!

~Tiffany
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh! This is very well written!
What a wonderful way of putting an end to the relationship Between Bella and Edward.
schedule February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey i really liked this story. i love Jacob and Bella fics i really hope u continue i would really love to see what will happen when she confronts Edward about her choice.
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow i loved this normally i hate jacob/bella fics but id love to read more please update soon!!!
schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this alternate storyline!
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