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for Nostrum Fortis Leo

by dmdarklord

schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i'm waiting! well, begging...
person Jealousy
schedule May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh noes! Not James! Please not James!.. Not yet anyways tehe.

Update more soon please!

xoxo
schedule May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I honestly flinched at that „Bang“, as if I were standing right next to James (not exactly a big wish at this point of the story, though). Just when I thought it could be all over, you leave us with this terrible cliff-hanger, craving for the next chapter. I’d hate you for doing it if it weren’t for that wonderful story and your ideas… *lol*
schedule May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Raw. Evil. Love it.

Waiting for update.
person DeeLish
schedule May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just found this story and i felt i had to review it.

I really love what you've done with this fic. I love stories that don't follow the normal yawn fest that is soppy Edward loving a clumsy Bella. I love the gritty, no punches pulled, in your face, rawness of this story. It's fabulous and i hope you update it soon as i desperately need my next fix.

DeeLish xx
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow this is a good story, can u give us a longer chap?
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
:O No Mr.Doctor man!!!!!!!
And Littlest Cullen.
James is pure evil I tell you. Pure Evil.

hehe good story. srslyon rhadames
person ReddTwilight
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've been keeping up with this story out of curiosity. I wanted to see where it would go, and i really really like it so far. I think i know what just happened... But i'll wait for the next chapter to see if i'm right.
Great job so far, can't wait for the next chapter!!
ReddTwilight
person slayya
schedule May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AHH! MEAN! Don't leave it there!! I need to find out what's going on! :( Pwease?
schedule May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok, here is a real review for you. this stoy is awesome. I think the writing is descriptive and very, very, good. I can hardly wait for you to update and when I see that you have I do an inward happy dance. Please update quicker! the suspense is killing me!
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