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April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
God, it’s an unbelievable pleasure to hate James with every new chapter. I could slap that guy whenever he shows up. ;)
I’m amazed how you manage to keep up all that tension even after so many (ugly) events. It’s like your chapters have superglue on them and we simply can’t help biting our nails in excitement until you post again. You’re doing such a great job with this story. Consider this review a declaration of love. ;)
I’m amazed how you manage to keep up all that tension even after so many (ugly) events. It’s like your chapters have superglue on them and we simply can’t help biting our nails in excitement until you post again. You’re doing such a great job with this story. Consider this review a declaration of love. ;)
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April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg it's so intense!
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April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!
James is sadistic! I hope Emmett ripps him limb from limb in the end!
Little pieces of James left and Edward spits on him.!
Great story though. I did actually say "NOOOO" when I read this chapter, out loud in my office. LOL.
James is sadistic! I hope Emmett ripps him limb from limb in the end!
Little pieces of James left and Edward spits on him.!
Great story though. I did actually say "NOOOO" when I read this chapter, out loud in my office. LOL.
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April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Do you seriously want to kill me with all this tension?? *lol*
You know, already by the middle of the last chapter I had this weird feeling that something was very, very wrong. I'm not really happy to know I was right. But at least the upside to this is that this story isn't finished yet and I can beg for the next chapter to come soon... ;)
You know, already by the middle of the last chapter I had this weird feeling that something was very, very wrong. I'm not really happy to know I was right. But at least the upside to this is that this story isn't finished yet and I can beg for the next chapter to come soon... ;)
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April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
update faster! i really like the story.
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April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
update faster! i'm enjoying the story
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hi my names Nim. I found your story and my friend and i have been keeping up on it as it updates. We think that you are focusing way too much on james and edward and we both know that those are the two that the story is actually about but we think that you whould do something involving jasper and/or emmett. This is just some of our thoughts we had on the story. I gotta say though it is a really great story.
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
should not whould haha im sorry
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March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I just gotta say that I am sooooo totally in love with this story. It picked up really quickly from the beginning, didn't drag, and the characterization is awsome. I LOVE the whole Edward is raped and abused thing you've got going on. I hope that the abuse doesn't end when their dad hands over the money, or you write a sequel. I think it would be amazing if James raped Edward in front of Jasper and Emmet, or gang raped Edward in front Jasper and Emmet, something like that. You've got a real penchant for writing, I was very impressed. I'm def. going to keep an eye out for this to be updated and anything else you write in the future, provided it's yaoi. My squick is hetro sex. ^_^ Much love.
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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Alright, I've either turned completely stupid or AFF didn't properly take my review last time since I could have sworn I already reviewed on your story a couple days ago. Sorry. ;) Anyway...
I would feel ashamed to say this story is great since the plot is everything but great, however, I would also feel ashamed if I didn’t tell you how well you’re doing it, no matter what you’re describing and how ugly it gets at times. You give enough details to cause me goose bumps, yet still leave so much to the imagination that it tends to get really scary at times.
Very smart choice of words, very impressing portrayals of all the characters you’re (ab)using. As I said before, if it were a nice plot, I could easily and simply call it “great”. :)
I would feel ashamed to say this story is great since the plot is everything but great, however, I would also feel ashamed if I didn’t tell you how well you’re doing it, no matter what you’re describing and how ugly it gets at times. You give enough details to cause me goose bumps, yet still leave so much to the imagination that it tends to get really scary at times.
Very smart choice of words, very impressing portrayals of all the characters you’re (ab)using. As I said before, if it were a nice plot, I could easily and simply call it “great”. :)