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June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hmmm.................... it's somewhat cute.....
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May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dang girl that was pretty darn fukin good!!!
is there gonna be more? sure hope soo!!!
is there gonna be more? sure hope soo!!!
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May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this... the details were great. I completely hear you with the whole review thing. But definitely keep up the good work.
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March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Of course we're absurd. Apparently I can review without being a member. It wouldn't let me when I tried last. Hrrmm... MOAR! *pout*
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March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The story was quite well written, but I would have liked to see more of a struggle in Edward. When it came right down to it, Edward seemed to be able to do sexual things with Bella without too much difficulty. Half the hotness of sexy Edward/Bella scenes is the difficulty of them. I like a few moments in the story when you have to wonder if Bella's actually going to live through it. LOL But I do like your writing style, and it was a creative way of initiating some hot, fluffy goodness! Nice work.
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February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HOOOOT!!!!! I love that story that was awesome keep writing please.
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February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
2000 hits and 4 reviews? You people are absurd.
A bit of friendly advice: insulting your readers probably isn't going to make them eager to review. Also, your hit count says 389 currently, not 2000.
I'm afraid a lower review count is just the way the cookie crumbles around aff. People are less inclined to review here than they are on ff.net. It sucks, yes, but don't feel too bad; these things always increase with time. Of course, like I said, it's probably in your best interest not to call people absurd if you wish to encourage reviews.
A bit of friendly advice: insulting your readers probably isn't going to make them eager to review. Also, your hit count says 389 currently, not 2000.
I'm afraid a lower review count is just the way the cookie crumbles around aff. People are less inclined to review here than they are on ff.net. It sucks, yes, but don't feel too bad; these things always increase with time. Of course, like I said, it's probably in your best interest not to call people absurd if you wish to encourage reviews.
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February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am still curious about the strangers fantasy, LOL. This was very good.