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March 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
O_o I highly encourage Bella to constantly push Edward's boundaries, woohoo!!!
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October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was sheer fun! Sexy and sensual, it was a great read.
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June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i can't
see him doing that.
hmm.........................
see him doing that.
hmm.........................
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June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story,
Both Bella and Edward were more or less in character; I hope you'll write more chapters to this!
In case noone answered this, you close italic with < / i> ^_^
Both Bella and Edward were more or less in character; I hope you'll write more chapters to this!
In case noone answered this, you close italic with < / i> ^_^
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April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was really hot. i think you should do a non-con with bella and james
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved your story. It was excellent really. Good work! About the italics thing, when you write a to begin italicizing you need to end it with a not just another . the / denotes ending of italics, another just sets italics to start again, which of course does nothing since you already did it. I'm definitely going to take a look at anything else you wrote, keep it up!
Elaret
Elaret
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February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good story. Very hot, and in-character!
P.S. I'm an experienced beta and would like to beta for you if you think that's necessary; and you end italics with
P.S. I'm an experienced beta and would like to beta for you if you think that's necessary; and you end italics with
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February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like your story ;-) Out-of-control Edward is really sexy, though if I were Bella, I'd keep pushing his boundaries especially after this experience *grins evilly*
Oh yeah, as for the italics: the closing is ;-) if you forget the / it won't make any difference, know what I mean?
Oh yeah, as for the italics: the closing is ;-) if you forget the / it won't make any difference, know what I mean?
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February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story!! Thoroughly enjoyed it!!
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February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved it there were a few errors, but I got over them easily! You should also check out fanfiction.net :-)