person Emelie
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
'It stared back.'

Best line ever!!

Love the story!
schedule April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Do you think he can see under the water?
Do you think he can hear me having a heart attack?
Do you think he's lifting me up higher to keep me from TOUCHING SOMETHING????

I glared down at my dick. It stared back.


Do you want your readers to die of laughing???? *lol* Too good to only read it one time, I swear!
Yummy, honeymoon AND solo trip. I like the idea as much as I like how you wrote it. And you’re so right about the solo part – everybody thinks/talks dirty there, and men just depend on images. It’s in their nature. So absolutely nothing wrong about how you wrote it!

And poor pillows… they seem to suffer a lot whenever Edward gets a little fun. I think by now almost every second story must be responsible for the death of an innocent, little pillow which simply happened to be at the wrong place at the wrong time. ;)
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yummy, yummy, yummy.
Aren't we all proud of our little dirty minds? ;P
person Foxmore
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
absolutely fantastic!
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
GAH! I cannot get enough! For I have one dirty mind xD
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