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for Making Do

by Blahsblah2001

schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update, and a fight! Ive always wanted to read a fight between Edward and Jacob so thank you. Please update soon I'm sure Bella will pick Jacob but not 100 percent sure.
person EvaBrick
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I really hope you finish it soon. Jacob is so much better than Edward. ;)
schedule March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was an intense chapter... Can't wait for the next one!!!
person Kate
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hehe. I love the writing style. You use enough imagery so that it keeps me from getting bored but not so much I can't fill in the blanks with my own mind.

I love this pairing. Then again, I'd love any pairing involving Jake. Well, anything but Jake/Edward. Jake/random tree somewhere in forest? Jake/anything that moves? Sure. I'm game.

I should stop talking. I just like smut with a little but just enough plot to keep me interested. Definitely anticipating more. Then again, you know that from teh emails.

In short: MOAR1!! please?
schedule March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
EDWARDS BACK! woo hoo i loed this i need more! I wonder who she will end uup with eddie or jake? hmmmmm. please update very soon :)
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay another chapter! I cant wait for Edwards return! please update son im in love with this story
person Reane
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Finally a new chapter, but a bummer you're ending it! What's your beef with PWP?!?!!? LOL. Thanks for this story though! I think this is pretty close to character!
Team Jacob for Life!!!!!!
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
the more sex the better! lol... That's my opinion. :) Being a girl I've never recieved a blow-job either... so I have no opinion there... Keep the chapters comming (cumming?) lol. I love this fic!
person Renae
schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woo-hoo! This is quickly becoming my favorite story! As far as stamina goes I don't think it's that far off. I mean, they are both teens, speaking as a 'not so long ago teen, I'm 21' sex is pretty much the first thing on your mind! Plus if I had a gorgous 6'7 Native American hottie head over heels for me I'm pretty sure he wouldn't be getting any sleep and it wouldn't be from patrol :-D
BTW, just as a side note, you write fantastic sex scenes & that conversation between the boys was HILARIOUS! I burst out laughing and my Japanese roommate looked at me with that 'retarded American' look. **grins**
You rock my Iowa socks!
schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay another chapter and so soon! I loved it and cant wait for more! please update soon :D
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