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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awsome I loved it! can't wait for the next update ^_^
ps. your story doesn't suck jus some ppl(sometimes me >.< lol) are to lazy to review so don't take it personal sweety =)
PPS.....keep up the good work! lol
ps. your story doesn't suck jus some ppl(sometimes me >.< lol) are to lazy to review so don't take it personal sweety =)
PPS.....keep up the good work! lol
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March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well those were definately two HOT and very good first chapters! I love it! Not sure I want Edward to come back... but if it make this fic longer than I'm all for it! Because this fic is too good to end now. lol...
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March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WooHoo! new chapter! Quoting must happen, its a force of nature:
“Bella, evidently,” Quil quipped. Realization dawned. -- my computer screen now has orange juice all over it. I laughed so hard when i read this.
“The woman is here,” Embry whispered conspiratorially, his hand cupping his mouth. “We cannot let her know of our secrets.” -- This also provoked more choking worthy laughing. I loved it. Its something I would say and I would so picture a bunch of boys (even if they are werewolves) saying it too.
I lied, I thought as I peeked over the edge at the water. I had tons of better things to do. Dishes. Laundry. Homework. I could count the little flowers on the living room wallpaper. I could find some small woodland creatures to provoke. -- this was my fave not because it was the funniest or the smartest but because you have Bella down so well that im jealous. You write her beautifully.
You just cured my hangover :) You did not dissapiont this chapter was great! who know sex on the beach could be so hot..I need a cold shower! Loved it cant wait for more please please update soon :)
“Bella, evidently,” Quil quipped. Realization dawned. -- my computer screen now has orange juice all over it. I laughed so hard when i read this.
“The woman is here,” Embry whispered conspiratorially, his hand cupping his mouth. “We cannot let her know of our secrets.” -- This also provoked more choking worthy laughing. I loved it. Its something I would say and I would so picture a bunch of boys (even if they are werewolves) saying it too.
I lied, I thought as I peeked over the edge at the water. I had tons of better things to do. Dishes. Laundry. Homework. I could count the little flowers on the living room wallpaper. I could find some small woodland creatures to provoke. -- this was my fave not because it was the funniest or the smartest but because you have Bella down so well that im jealous. You write her beautifully.
You just cured my hangover :) You did not dissapiont this chapter was great! who know sex on the beach could be so hot..I need a cold shower! Loved it cant wait for more please please update soon :)
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March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No Edward Please!!!!!! If at all possible????? Or just to make her realize that with Jake she is choosing life, her humanity,her family,her soulmate...
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March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Please keep it going...we need more Jacob/Bella stories.
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March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My.God....so much stuff to quote here goes!
“I had sex,” I said.
“Yeah, you did,” Jacob agreed, regarding me warily --lol i loved this. Its sooo Bella :)
Never underestimate the willpower of men on a fishing trip. -- Brillaint im gonna be saying this for weeks.
“Sorry I slept with you, it was an accident, it wasn't that good, and if you'll excuse me I'm gonna go back to fawning over my bloodsucking true love.” -- this was so leah that it could of been in the books.
“Stupid werewolf pride,” -- again so Bella i loved it. I want it on a shirt.
“And what are you, a baby monkey?” -- made me laugh so hard i think i peed just a little.
“Yes I did. Tiny, evil, restricting clasps have no place in this world. Particularly when they're between me and-” -- more almost peeing here.
My bra had not died in vain. -- and just pure fucking gold lol.
I LOVE this story. I normally dont go in for the whole Jaoob and Bella thing, im team Edward but this is so good. Im addicted i must have more. I cant wait until Edward comes back its gonna be so dramatic and juicy *squee!*. And i didnt notice your spelling mistakes :). Ok this has gotta be the longest review ive ever written. please update soon :)
“I had sex,” I said.
“Yeah, you did,” Jacob agreed, regarding me warily --lol i loved this. Its sooo Bella :)
Never underestimate the willpower of men on a fishing trip. -- Brillaint im gonna be saying this for weeks.
“Sorry I slept with you, it was an accident, it wasn't that good, and if you'll excuse me I'm gonna go back to fawning over my bloodsucking true love.” -- this was so leah that it could of been in the books.
“Stupid werewolf pride,” -- again so Bella i loved it. I want it on a shirt.
“And what are you, a baby monkey?” -- made me laugh so hard i think i peed just a little.
“Yes I did. Tiny, evil, restricting clasps have no place in this world. Particularly when they're between me and-” -- more almost peeing here.
My bra had not died in vain. -- and just pure fucking gold lol.
I LOVE this story. I normally dont go in for the whole Jaoob and Bella thing, im team Edward but this is so good. Im addicted i must have more. I cant wait until Edward comes back its gonna be so dramatic and juicy *squee!*. And i didnt notice your spelling mistakes :). Ok this has gotta be the longest review ive ever written. please update soon :)
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March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!!! You continued!! and i still love it!
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March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome start.
I liked Bella hearing Edward in her mind.
I liked Bella hearing Edward in her mind.
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March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was fantastic. It would be great to have more chapters, but at the same time can it get any better? Wouldn't it just go down hill from here? lol
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March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey i loved this i hope you continue it!