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March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update, really enjoyed it. It seems to skip a bit, and OMG she's pregnant! LOL... sorry!
schedule
March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, hope you write more soon.
BTW, Edward's birthday is June 20.
BTW, Edward's birthday is June 20.
schedule
March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I felt a little bad for Edward when he had to eat his birthday dinner all alone, :). I would say after 4 months that he has proved himself to be a gentleman. :D Nice to see their first time lasted 3 days, LOL.
I am curious why you chose to change Edward's birthdate? In case you didn't know....according to SM it's June 20th.
I am curious why you chose to change Edward's birthdate? In case you didn't know....according to SM it's June 20th.
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved that chapter!! Anything that has the two of them coupling in any way I love. Especially the line, "Your hold is permanent and unbreakable", EXCELLENT line!!! Fantastic writing!!!
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a perfect first date for them. Well done. I am glad she told he why she left in the morning.
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March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Boy when these finally start asking their questions they are going to explode, LOL. They need to be answered though. I hope the next chapter will get them some answers. I especially want Bella to let Edward know why she leaves in the morning.
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March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter!!! Can't wait to see what happens. Thank you as well for all of your reviews!!!
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March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, I am glad they both have the same questions. :) can't wait for the update ;) Date night should be good!
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March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch 7 is really hard to read and pay attention to . the whole "ÒBella,Ó" thing is annoying. Whats going on with it?why are those O's every where?
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March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah. I am so glad they talked it out. Sweet sweet chapter.