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schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
give me more give me give me more!
schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i have died and gone to heaven....... MORE!!!!! -follows you around till you post it.-
schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
If there isnt a lemon in this next chapter unspeakable evil shall fall upon your house. lol jkjk but really im going to shoot you with my muffin launcher if you dont do something smutty in the next chapter. The kiss was wonderful. It was as romantic as i had hoped it would be.
schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I do believe I'm your second hundredth reviewer. Congratulations on that one! Normally I'm not much into het stories—or twilight, for that matter—but I decided to give this story the benefit of the doubt, and I'm glad I did. I enjoyed every moment of it, giggling through most of the Emmett moments, and growling in irritation through Edward's. I've never been quite so annoyed with Edward as I am right now, though I must admit to having enjoyed Bella standing up to his overbearing nature immensely. *coughs*

I hope to see another update sooner rather than later. 5/5!

-MistedVines.
person Sekhmet
schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FINALLY!!! I am so excited!! It was amazing my love! I liked it so much more because it was spontaneous and not planned like they were originally planning to do on Christmas Eve...this was much better and a very good choice! You are wonderful! And I look forward to many chapters filled with smutty goodness and juicy plot as I know you are beyond capable of giving me! I know you are busy, but I am really looking forward to your next update! I check everyday!
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I LOVE YOU!! This is the best Jasper/Bella story in the history of EVER!!! I've been reading since about chapter five, and keep forgetting to review. For that, I am sorry, because you are definitely an awesome writer. I like the fact that you did not make Alice a total bitch whore, pardon the language. I've read alot of fanfics like that, and I've never been able to see Alice being evil. I could however see Edward acting like he did in the Meadow Break-up scene. My younger sister and I both read and post off of the same account on this site, so this review is from two people instead of just one. And I just have to say. . .it's about time they told each other. Please keep this story going, I can't wait to see what happens next!!
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*claps* i loved it im so happy its finalyl out there no more hidding and everything now we REALLY get to see the relationship. Im looking forward tot he following chapters keep up the great work!
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol Wow! What a way to bring them together! xD Sounds like a lemon in next chapter? I plead with you not to turn them into bopping bunnies the whole time! Also please don't end this story soon! You still have so much to write about! >:O It's just beginning now!!!!!!! xD If you end this story soon there will be angry fans beating down your door and making sure you write more for us!!! We have chinese finger traps don't mess with us!!!!!
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
gaaaaaaaaaaaaaah.
you're a tease. :[!
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, FINALLY! Thank you, that was such a cute plan and such a lovely scene... you had me practically screaming with laughter at some points! It was a great chapter, now pleaseplease update soon and let us see how Bella and Jasper use the privacy their family is so kindly granting them...?
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