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by Lollydolly

person DeeLish
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
THANK THE LORD. God i am soooooo glad that they finally got it all out in the open, the suspense was killing me.

The only thing i'm not looking forward to now is the next 20 chapters before they actually get it on or anything remotely sexual....there needs to be some smut asap!!

Please update soon, don't leave me hanging! xxx
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yeah!!! my hair is saved!
I loved this chapter BTW. not just because you wrote the kiss scene. but the story behind was amazing. I really enjoyed Jaspers perspective on the family without Edward and Alice there.
Sucks that the next chapter is going to take longer but I understand. It is easy to forget that you as a writer have a life beyond the story you create. at least we have a steamy kiss scene to read over and over again until you update.
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg...finally
great job
it was what i wanted it to be like
now give us somemore...please
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM

If I dont get an update soon I am going to end up in a corner huddled in the fetal position rocking back and forth chewing on my hair.
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
need a new chapter you just can't leave me hanging like that i'll die so PLEASE!!!!! new chapter
schedule May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i soooo love this story and although i'm frustrated that they still aren't together yet, at the same time i love the feeling of anticipation :D.
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yipee, another chapter! I must say, it was a very cute chapter and I didn't expect the Cullens to be anti-Christmas at ALL, much less Esme. But it was really nice how they all got into it and enjoyed it, even Emmett. Again, the Jasper/Bella longing and interaction is driving me nuts!! These two are so blind! How could Jasper be jealous of Carlisle?! That was a nice touch. At least he's finally gonna tell her by Christmas! And what's with the little animals? We need more updates, pleeeeease!
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
finally hes going to get somewhere. I love it as usual. I hope no one comes back and ruins all of his plans. I Cant wait to read more! ^,^
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
fluffly filler chapter? I would never of known if you hadn't told me. It is just as good as all the rest which are wonderful...so please update soon as I'm in love with your writing.
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please, Please, PLEASE keep up the great writing with this one. You have really invented a much more interesting couple than the original Edward and Bella, while also doing a better job of developing the Cullen family of characters. It is just lovely and makes for excellent reading. And if you could add chapters a little bit faster, that would keep me from imploding with anticipation! Well done and please keep going!
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