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Oh yeah, another wonderful chapter!! It's amazing how well Charlie is taking to Jasper, and how he (apparently), Esme, & Emmett are picking up on how Jasper feels about Bella but they're both oblivious to how the other feels! And even though I'm dying for them to finally fess up to how they feel, especially now after they've revealed the paintings, I'd love for you to drag this whole story on for as LONG as possible! You're such an amazing writer! I'm utterly addicted & can't wait for more! (p.s. I don't know if it was intentional, but I thought the garlic bread was a funny/ ironic touch)

-follows you around till you update- MOOOOOAARRRRR

More please!!!!! I love it!!!

D all of the above.
I love it because your writing style is really great and each chapter brings Bella and Jasper to life.
I hate it because the tention you have created is so strong, I am ready to see them both happy
Maybe not a "confess all" but jeezz would a real kiss be to much?
My Favorite story on the board. Keep it up, PLEASE update soon.

more...I want more
please more
its so good
I've been reading to my girlfriend and she loves it too
so more please soon

i love it!!! make then come clean with how they feel please!!! its driving me insane!!!! but its really good. keep it up!!

As always I loved your up date and can't wait for the next!!! You are doing a great job with the story;)

OMG The dreaded end of the chapter came again!!!! I kept looking over at the scroll thingy on the side of the screen, and going omg nooo its going to end!!!!! That was less then halfway through the story! Its seems to be picking up now. It was super good before but now you've added the Blacks. lol La Push. lol Thats such an oddball name hehehehe Anyways! I will look forward to your update! I can't wait to find out what happens next! Also I dread the day that this story ends!!!!!!!!!! T.T Please make it go on and on forever!!!!!! I'll pay you in shoe laces and german chocolate cakes!!!!! O.O I love you!!!!!!!! T.T ok bb

Still lovin it! I really wish they would confess already though.

Ch.17 is very very good,
I can't wait for Ch.18-100.
You are such a wonderful writer,
I'm so amazed, I feel as if I'm
reading a novel.
Please update soon :D