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Okay, i am actually physically and mentally hooked on this story, it's amazing and i'm loving it. But for the love of christ please tell me they'll confess soon and have one huge smut filled night together?!?! These chapters have been like the looongest foreplay and i'm absolutely DYING to read some action, please please PLEASE tell me it's coming soon?? Or atleast placate me with a passionate kiss somewhere, the suspense is killing me!!!

DeeLish xx

I love it, I just read all the chapters at once of course this leads to me wishing there were more, but I will just have to be patient and wait for you to post them.

Ok...so I absolutely adore this story. I had never even thought about this pairing until I read your story, and I think you did such an amazing job with it! There is the perfect amount of humor in it, I found myself laughing out loud on more then one occasion. Your writing style just makes it easy to really imagine it happening. And nothing feels out of character to me. It just works perfectly. Also, I love the anticipation of Jasper and Bella getting together.. I think it will make the moment it does happen better then ever! I seriously never want this story to end. I keep checking the site to see if you have updated. So please keep updating! I love it, this is a great story!! And I hope there are many more chapters to come.

Oh... and I would also like to mention...that because of this story I can't read anything else. Nothing else will satisfy me.. I keep thinking about this story. Damn...damn you and your amazing writing skills..and your amazing story.. you will just have to update.. and tell me what other stories you will be writing, or have written, so I can read those too :D

I've been following this story from the beginning, and I love it!

Happy for Jasper, but still kinda feel sorry for Edward, which just proves how talented you are, being able to make the characters seem real.

This is like my favourite obsession at the moment.
Cheers for the story.

And please, i REALLY want more. :L x

You know I wasn't a big Jasper and Bella fan but the way you have worked this story is great it is one of my favorites. I can't wait for the next update!! I love your style of writing, you don't have a lot of (oc) in your story it is something that could be more possible .....you are making me a big fan of your writing I really hope you intend to keep writing more twilight fan fics now since you have gained an audience, who loves your writing;) Thank you for giving us all a good story to get wrapped up in!!!!!

Oh wow,
This is the best
Bella and Jasper fan fiction
ever written.
I simply love it.

omg i love this story!!! i have it running through my head as its the real book. please tell me this is not the end of it. it has to continue!!! please!

this story is amazing. makes me all happy and such. good job! keep it up!