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April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amazing seriously. Write more soon!
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March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Seriously, I am completely in love with this story. I stumbled upon it 2 days ago & have spent every free second reading it. I even created an account on here & ff.net just so I could tell you how incredible this story is. Without a doubt the best fic I've read, probably ever. Your portrayal of the characters is incredible, and your writing has me so hooked that I wish the books had followed this plot instead. PLEASE don't let it end here...I'm dying to know what happens next. An update would be amazing... :D I think I may be going through withdrawals. lol. Thanks!
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February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so I did actually read this wonderful story over here, at least a little over six months ago, but I didn’t review because I figured I just leave one over at ff.net instead, which I have and a few more since then too! But seeing as you’ve not been updating in roughly that same amount of time, I thought that maybe I should leave one over here too! And Voila, hehe, but I must warn you it’s a rough copy of my first one over at ff.net, just so you know, sorry but I’m a little lazy, oops!
Anyway, on with the review shall we; hehe! Wow, I'm almost speechless here, I swear to God, that this story of yours must be of one the absolutely best ones I've yet to read, I love it so much! Big Kudos to you! The plot is amazing, I think and quite original too (well, at least for me), the character portrayal's awesome as well, as the character interactions, of course, especially Bella/Jasper, but I totally love the way you described all of them, so...lol!
And the whole story itself is very well written, which I very much appreciate, so thank you! The fic is also hilarious, Emmett is especially funny, I love him even more now, thanks to you. Jasper's of course, one of my favourites as well, as Bella; he's amazing and totally delicious and she's so adorable and cool in this fic, not at all like in the books, which is a major plus, hehe!
Rosealie is awesome too and very sweet, I really liked how Bella and she slowly became friends, very nice. Esme and Carlisle are really sweet too and I also really liked their respective relationship with Bella, so sweet! Edward now, well; he's quite the arse in this one, let's just say that I'm not he's biggest fan right now, lol! And poor Alice, tsk tsk...at first I kind of resented her a little bit, but then I thought that maybe; what she did was best for everyone, even though she left Jasper in such a state and whatnot! I mean; because all of it would have happed anyway, right?! And remember; "What doesn't kill you, make you stronger", so...It all worked out pretty good in the end, well, kind of! Edward is still heartbroken though, but I'm sure he'll too see the light at the end of the tunnel, right?!
Now to the review of this particular chapter; the character interaction was excellent as always, the first scene with Jasper and Rosalie was so sweet, I can't believe he'd never hugged her before, oh well, it was über-cute!
And well, the funniest scene must have been the one with Bella and Emmett; he named all of his pets Bob, haha! More so, he actually went to a beauty school in the 80´s on a dare and there was the make-up, wow, that sure was pretty priceless! I kept thinking that Bella had to take a picture of him, all dolled up, that would be so much fun, hehe!
The whole cabin scene with her and Jasper was wonderful, of course, another favourite of mine! Awe, he cooked for her, that's beyond sweet, man, I'm a little jealous here, lol! And then there was the small lemon scene towards the end, wow, that sure was pretty hot, but I want more and I bet they want more too, laughs! Cannot wait to read more, so please update soon...
Anyway, on with the review shall we; hehe! Wow, I'm almost speechless here, I swear to God, that this story of yours must be of one the absolutely best ones I've yet to read, I love it so much! Big Kudos to you! The plot is amazing, I think and quite original too (well, at least for me), the character portrayal's awesome as well, as the character interactions, of course, especially Bella/Jasper, but I totally love the way you described all of them, so...lol!
And the whole story itself is very well written, which I very much appreciate, so thank you! The fic is also hilarious, Emmett is especially funny, I love him even more now, thanks to you. Jasper's of course, one of my favourites as well, as Bella; he's amazing and totally delicious and she's so adorable and cool in this fic, not at all like in the books, which is a major plus, hehe!
Rosealie is awesome too and very sweet, I really liked how Bella and she slowly became friends, very nice. Esme and Carlisle are really sweet too and I also really liked their respective relationship with Bella, so sweet! Edward now, well; he's quite the arse in this one, let's just say that I'm not he's biggest fan right now, lol! And poor Alice, tsk tsk...at first I kind of resented her a little bit, but then I thought that maybe; what she did was best for everyone, even though she left Jasper in such a state and whatnot! I mean; because all of it would have happed anyway, right?! And remember; "What doesn't kill you, make you stronger", so...It all worked out pretty good in the end, well, kind of! Edward is still heartbroken though, but I'm sure he'll too see the light at the end of the tunnel, right?!
Now to the review of this particular chapter; the character interaction was excellent as always, the first scene with Jasper and Rosalie was so sweet, I can't believe he'd never hugged her before, oh well, it was über-cute!
And well, the funniest scene must have been the one with Bella and Emmett; he named all of his pets Bob, haha! More so, he actually went to a beauty school in the 80´s on a dare and there was the make-up, wow, that sure was pretty priceless! I kept thinking that Bella had to take a picture of him, all dolled up, that would be so much fun, hehe!
The whole cabin scene with her and Jasper was wonderful, of course, another favourite of mine! Awe, he cooked for her, that's beyond sweet, man, I'm a little jealous here, lol! And then there was the small lemon scene towards the end, wow, that sure was pretty hot, but I want more and I bet they want more too, laughs! Cannot wait to read more, so please update soon...
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December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You have inspired me!! I read this entire story and the one on fanfiction.net and I have to say that I had the most brilliant idea for a story. not a jasper and bella ff but still an amazing story. and I would love for you to give me so notes. I introduced a new character, and I have been writing all weekend. I wrote the outline in an hr and a 1/2 and it is now 13 pgs in word. I had my fiance read the first couple pages and he said it was good and he wanted to keep reading but I don't know if he's just being nice. help?
- Lyllie
- Lyllie
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November 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Omg. I am fervently in love with this ff. I want more!! I have spent nearly my entire thanksgiving weekend reading this. the way you write it's like I'm there and in the head of the character. I love it!! and I love your portrayal of the characters. although I was a little apprehensive since I love Edward but I have to say you made me a Jasper/Bella shipper. please write more soon. I shall be looking out for it!!
<3 Lyllie
<3 Lyllie
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November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think this is an amazing story. I liked this better than the actual books. In fact I created an account on here just so I can tell you how incredible this story is. Please continue it. I will be checking back every day for updates. You have me hooked
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October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You.Need.To.POST.MOAR!
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October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello...Lollydolly...are you there? Have you lost interest in this story (I hope not!)? If this story is not complete (please keep going--there is just SO much left!), please please please add a new chapter soon. It is now more than halfway down page THREE of the Twilight stories--too far from the top for AFF newbies to find!!! Your many fans are dying of anticipation!!! I hate to sound so pathetic, groveling and begging, but this story is too good not to finish--by far one of the very best BellaXJasper fics, and one of my very favorite OOC Jaspers!!!
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September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love this Story. It is wonderfully written can't wait to read more.
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September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Still anxiously AWAITING (ha ha)the continuation of this great fanfic. Please subdue my fears that it's over by posting another chappy! With all this time, I've had so many ideas about upcoming chapters. Alas I do not write, so nothing I can fathom would compare to your genius. Please, please, please, please, please, please, please update soon! It'll be sweet (and hopefully lemon-fresh!)!!!