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The ending there seemed a little abrupt, and not even like a cliffhanger but like you meant to write more and didn't or something got accidentally erased. (I just don't want to miss any part of your juicy story, so I get worried LOL). So I never thought I'd see Bella trying to talk Charlie into going against Edward, and I also hadn't noticed how Charlie was a lot like Jasper after Renee left him. That was an interesting chord to strike. And I also didn't expect to dread having Edward trying to salvage their relationship as much as I actually did. It feels SO MUCH like "Slow Dancing in a Burning Room" by John Mayer! (I really don't want her to go to the party with Edward; the boy is just getting in the way of Jasper and I'm not having that.) And now we can get to the bottom of Bella's shield on Jasper! Great chapter! Keep 'em coming!!!

Jzzz I had to make an account jsut to review this, it never used to be this way... I stopped reviewing storys on here because of that. Anyways, I just wanted to let you know that I really love this story! You've had me smiling like an idiot while reading it. I have really been enjoying this story. I was so sad when I hit chapter 13 today.... I tried to go forward to the next chapter and it wouldn't and I was like NOOOOOOOOOOOO! I'm completly addicted to this story, I wish I could explain how much I love it better to you but i'm not good at putting my emotions in writing... Please update soon before I go crazy. O.O

great!!! i loved the chapter! i especially liked that jesper comforted bella, that emmet gave her a green pig, that bella and jesper are growing closer as friends every day and that jesper still needs bella so much XD

what can I say, your doing a great job with this story!!Can't wait for your next chapter:)

Dam it LOL why Jasper and didnt Alice see this happening Look at what it doing to poor Edward... awww

Great chapter! I loved it! I think you did a great job with it all. I wonder what Carlisle was holding back from Bella--what he was thinking about. And what will Charlie say?

I'm so excited for the next chapter--as always! Keep it up! And please, please, please don't make us wait too long!

again i freakin love your fanfic! amazing. i wish edward would pull his head out of his bum

I was soooo pleasantly surprised Sunday night when I saw ch 13 was up!!! I love Jasper being there for Bella, even if Emmett got the wrong impression the next morning. And Edward is being a baby about the break-up; I can't believe he'd go after Jasper like that!! I never thought I'd be saying this, but screw Edward! I was shocked Carlisle wanted to talk to Bella. Maybe it seems off to you b/c she's not more comfortable with him. I thought she was. But I thought it was still appropriate as it showed his natural paternal concern. Awesome chapter, as usual! Keep up the great work, & update ASAP!!!!!!!!

i love this story i cant wait to read the next chapter!!! this is a really good story and i actualy like this better than the twilight series

Thanks so much for posting! I love your story! I agree that Carlisle's conversation lacked something. I don't think he sounded as concerned for Jasper as I think he would be. Jasper's barely speaking at home, any parent would be having a heart attack, so to speak... I can't wait fo Angela's party. I want them to dress as an angel and a devil, Bella being the devil caue it'd make Jasper laugh.