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Personally I enjoyed reading the conversation between C and B, I thought it showed both the fatherly side and the understanding side of C's nature. I would have liked to see C maybe delve into the break up between B and E but I like the distance there and it showed B that he/the would still want her around the family.
I am really enjoying the emotion you put into your writing. As much as I love E, I like the jealousness, I am starting to think that in your story, E's feelings for Bella were not "Love" as much as "Posesion".(sorry for the spelling)
I like the build up with B and J. when you do get around to it, those scenes will be worth the wait!
You have a great writing skill.
Keep going, when you can...I am addicted.

YAY YAY aother update. oooo its so juicy but as much as i love the whole bella jasper thing when edward was all moody i was thinking, comon bella take him back. But it think thats just cos im so team edward lol. I liked the conversation with carlise and bella i didnt see anything wrong with it, i thought you did it well. I wonder how jasper and edward will be around each other now esp with bella there, and the whole explaining it to charlie deal. update soon!

oooooooooooo loved the last chapter, been working on my own fan fic been neglecting those i read

I love this story! Cant wait for more. hopefully we see some Bella/Jasper soon!

I love this story and you are doing an awesome job!!! I must say it was very creative how you have worked it all together. Can't wait for the next chapter!!

WOOT WOOT!!! Another amazing chapter!!!!!!!!!!
Okay, so I didn't really get the whole thing with the swan and the tiger figurines, but I'm sure it'll all mean something later. And I have a feeling I know what Jasper & Bella will each be drawing :) It's also cool to see her bond w/ Emmett more. It's quite entertaining.
And Edward is REALLY getting on my nerves, but I didn't expect her to "take a break" w/ him!! That was awesome of her!!! Cue in the wonderful and comforting Jasper to come to her rescue and sweep her off her feet!!! I'm totally excited about your next chapter!! Cannot wait, as usual!!!

great job! cant wait for the next chapter!

I got butterflies in my stomache!
I cant wait for the next chapter!

Don't ever apoligise for it being long as long as its ingaging there is nothing wron with a long chapter I will never understand some people's need to keep a chapter short that is just anoying. This was a great length and a great chapter I can't wait to read more.

OH MY GOD! she broke up with Edward?? The shackles have been released! This is by far my fave chapter. I loved the picture that Jasper painted for Bella, i started laughing when i thought about it. And i cant wait to find out what Bella's picture is although i have a sneaking suspsion. Im really glad you put in some quality Emmett time in, hes one of my fave characters and alot of people tend to ignore him when they write fan fics but your Emmett was spot on. Oh and the mediveal outfit drawing was so funny. I relly liked George too, and the little swan Bella ot from him. Ooooo i hope Jasper and Bella hook up while Edward is out of the picture for a bit which is strange for me cos im so Team Edward but still. Please update soon im desprate to read more.