rate_review Reviews

You're such a tease. The story is really coming along and I love the long chapters. There's nothing worse than a short chapter with no substance!

YOU!!!!!

you totally made me late for my 9am class!! i had logged in to check my email this morning and firefox resumed from my previous session and i saw an arrow meaning you had written another chapter! of course i sat down and read over it like twice.

(yah you're soo awesome that made my sluggish morning!)

AWESOMENESS, total awesomeness!!!! I couldn't have been happier when I checked on the website today (particularly for your update, as I've been continuously doing over the weekend) and found you had posted a new chapter!! It was incredible! And I love that it was quite long! Great to see the turmoil in Jasper as he keeps falling for Bella without realizing it. "Edward was going to have to learn to share if he didn't kill me. There was no way I would give up something as special as Bella." That was probably my fav quote of this chapter, but I found the first part of it to be hilarious in context. Edward is getting irritating, and I'm glad Bella feels the same. It's be funny to watch him come back after his trip to see his brother all cozy & BFF's with Bella! Please update ASAP!!!!

I utterly love you. This fic simply makes my day, evening, and week no matter what chapter i am reading! thank you so so so much and plz post again soon!

YAY, you updated again!!!! I was sooo thrilled when I went on the site this afternoon and saw you had added ch. 9!! Terrific chapter! It's interesting to see Edward express his jealousy (in public), & that was all pretty intense b/w Jasper & Bella. I really thought he'd hurt her in his rage. But I LOVE how they keep getting closer and she keeps yearning for him (subconsciously) more and more. Can't wait to see Edward's reaction & how Jasper will handle becoming closer to Bella. Please don't take too long to update!! I just can't take the wait!

OH!!!! Yeah!
I cant wait for JPOV!
Edwards jealousy is written very well.
I really like the direction of the story.
Hope you update soon.

waaaaaaaaaaaaahaaaa i love it and i love u .o. dont' stop please!

woah awesome chapter. I ant wait to see how edward reacts when he finds out what happens, he'll be super agro lol. Oooooooo Bella nd Jasper are getting closer and closer...Please update soon i cant wait for more.

love the story, can't wait for the update

you're killing me with having to wait! I can't stand it! update soon please??