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for Destiny Awaits

by Lollydolly

schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
All I have to write is OMG!!
I cant wait till you update again!
person makki
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
... makki loves u lol

still fantastic
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay a nice long chapter. I thought it was really really good. You wrote Edward to the tee. It was so like him it was crazy. I cant wait to see where this goes update soon :)
person makki
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god this was so delightful to read. you really made my day! thank you so much and no it couldn't have been made much better. Utterly fantastic and sweet hun.
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You certainly did NOT disappoint with this! It was great. I was THRILLED when I went online and saw you had posted another chapter! I really needed it; it sure as hell takes the edge of studying physics all day! Why is Edward being so pissy and moody? He's starting to get on my nerves. Great to hear Jasper's POV. Poor thing, he's hurting so bad. Keep up w/ the fantastic work, and post more!! :)
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I honestly have to say that this story is one of the better ones that I have read! I have always found it interesting whenever writers input Bella into another realtionship with another character! I really like how you can feel the emotions of the characters as you read it. Please keep writing...I have this story bookmarked and check daily for updates.

Be Inspired.
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy you finally put up another chapter! The wait was killing me! It's good to see that Jasper is opening up to Bella at some level, but I still dunno what you're gonna do about Edward. And now you've tossed in Alice back into the mix. Can't wait to see where you're gonna take this!! Please don't take too long to post again.
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooooo Alice is on the phone wonder what will happen.
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhhhhh a cliff hanger......damn it! Once again a great read keep it up!
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
more!!!!!!!!!!!!
I really love the emotion in your writing!
This is the first Jasper/Bella combo I have read. I like it.
Hope it get juicy.....
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