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March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this storyf, I hope you will continue on with it.
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March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hee hee...Edwards POV is totally warranted. I was wondering what was going on in his head. Although in character I expected him to be a lot more volatile. The armrest was a nice touch though. Great use of vocab. The tension build up was right on. Good cliff hanger. I totally want to know what running through Jaspers head right now. I assume he overreacted because he sensed Edwards tension. Or maybe he is getting sick of Bella? Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I wanna know!
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March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really love where you're taking the story! You don't know how much I've wanted to explore a Jasper/Bella relationship. I find its possibilities quite interesting. You're doing a great job! Please keep posting!!
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March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh i can't wait to read more Update soon please
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March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this story..it leaves off making you want more. I also like the dynamic shared between Bella and Jasper. Always thought there was some chemistry there. This is my first review ever! You should feel special. I actually registered so I could review. I want more!!
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March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cant wait to read how Edward will react when he sees Bella and Jasper on the sofa.
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March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh!!!
I think you did a great job writing EPOV. I like the Bella/Jasper combo...update soon there is alot of emotion in your writing. I love it!
I think you did a great job writing EPOV. I like the Bella/Jasper combo...update soon there is alot of emotion in your writing. I love it!
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March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
thanks for your FF pen name, I'll add you!
Good chapter, it's always harder to write in the opposite sex pov in my opinion lol.
I did like seeing things from edwards pov, but I'd prefer Jpov later on lol
Good chapter, it's always harder to write in the opposite sex pov in my opinion lol.
I did like seeing things from edwards pov, but I'd prefer Jpov later on lol
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March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oooooo two chapters hehe i feel soo spoiled. great though truly great, i am really hopping you don't abandon your story here its too good to do that too it.
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March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay another chap loving your regular updates. You wrote in Edwards POV really well! I loved it please update soon i cant wait to see what happens next!