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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey wow this is great please update soon i cant wait to see where this goes
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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Its a great story can't wait for more... i wonder how edward is going to react to the sight in his bedroom... can only imagine
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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Same SN on FF? (mine is if your wondering, lol)
I really love this story, it's growing on me with each chapter and I am sooo happy that I don't have to wait 2 weeks for an update! Thank you.
I like how vulnerable Jasper is, will you give us an insight into what Jasper is thinking? Maybe a JPOV, even just a brief one.
Becka
I really love this story, it's growing on me with each chapter and I am sooo happy that I don't have to wait 2 weeks for an update! Thank you.
I like how vulnerable Jasper is, will you give us an insight into what Jasper is thinking? Maybe a JPOV, even just a brief one.
Becka
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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story
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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay another chapter. Im really liking this story. Ive never been keen on bella/jasper fics but this one is great plz update soon!
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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh its just as lovely as the other chapters! So very lovely. You have a style well suited to the twilight series, which is quite an accomplishment. Many fanwriters don't have the ability to match it.
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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great start, more please!
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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the chapter lenghts as they are.
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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, the only question I have is how are you going to get Edward out of the way?
i mean most use cheating (on Edward's side 90% of the time and cheating on Bella's side 10%), then they like to kill off Edward/Alice, plus a plethora of other ways lol.
i mean most use cheating (on Edward's side 90% of the time and cheating on Bella's side 10%), then they like to kill off Edward/Alice, plus a plethora of other ways lol.
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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i like this and hope that you continue your story. However, I don't think he'd be normal in hours. when they change, they change strongly and permanently. She might be able to change but he'd still be madly in love with her. just some constructive crit ^_^