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for Destiny Awaits

by Lollydolly

schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I thought the same as innocent little flower. Totally thought Edward was gonna show up while she was in the tub. That would have been awesome! Not that I didn't like what actually happened. mmmmmm..... more of that please.
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ack I love you're story! Hands down, best Bella/Jasper I ever read! and I plead that you update! Please don't stop my friend and I are in love with the story and good Bella/Jasper stories are hard to come by. I would be very grateful if you kept up the wonderful authorship :D
person DeeLish
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Finally and update, its been aaaaages since you last added a chapter! Don't leave it so long next time!!

Great chpater, can't see why you're worried about it, it reads very well and is so very enjoyable! I love the relationship development between Jasper and Bella! Keep it up.

DeeLish xXx
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hehehe I'm sooo looking forward to Bella's reaction to that conversation XD
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whew! What a chapter... between all the funny conversations to the hotness between Jasper and Bella...! WOW! That one was GREAT!
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH! Please don't wait so long to post in the future! That was pure torture! I was having withdrawls and then I just decided to log on and send you a death threat! But then I noticed you updated. I'm still mad though! So i'm still going to send you a death threat! Eheem. DIE!!!!!! How could you be so mean!!!! *cries* Update fast pl0x! xD Well now I feel better. Off I go.
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I dont know why you dont like this chapter i think it was as good as the other, but you are your worst critic as my chorus director use to say. I dont know why but when ever bella is alone i keep thinking edward in a desprate attempt to get her back is just going to show up.
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
must have moooooorre!!! i hope you update again very very very soon.
person Sekhmet
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!!!!!!! You updated one of my favorite stories in the whole wide world! I love it! I can't wait for the conversation between bella and emmett. That's going to be awesome! And I really can't wait for the below the waist part....yum....looking forward to more!!
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WONDERFUL! -dies of awe-
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