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YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was awesome! I must look ridiculous while I am reading your story because I just have this huge goofy smile on my face the entire time lol. But honestly, everything was sooo perfect! I love how over protective Emmett is and I loved the conversation between Jasper and Charlie, and I loved when Edward called Bella...it was bittersweet and definitely realistic. And umm hello...the smut was friggin fantastic!!!! I can't wait for more of it!!! Please update soon?!! I absoloutely adore yoou and your amazing story!!

haha,love it! very entertaining and sweet. can't wait to see the interragation,lol. keep it up!

Once again you've done a splendid job in making me hang from every word I read within your latest chapter. I Find myself coming on here like an addict waiting for every new addition you put into the story, and when I finally see that you've added the new addition I promise I do a small dance of excitement. This is truely my favorite fanfic ever. The love you have woven between Jasper and Bella is so sweet and completely perfect, way better then any fanfics I have read based on any other pairings. I'll be anxiously awaiting another addition to the growing story.

Mmmmmm....awesome. Just freakin awesome. Better than what I wanted to happen. Still want to see some action but I love that you had them talk for a bit first. The thing with Charlie was too cute. Also looking forward to some Edward drama! Please post again soon. I can't take another long wait like that again!

Wheres my smut? damn it! Why does the whole family keep interupting???????? it was great and i knew edward would put a damper on it somehow. i love it as usual.

Very good, very fluffy, me likey!!! Its entertainingly sweet to see all the Cullens flapping around them, trying to get details etc etc. Please post more soon, this last update was waaaay too long. (Ooo...and the dark version sounds like it'll be worth a read!)

DeeLish xx

AH!!! OMG!!!
Ok, first the conversation with Edward, was so real, I think I have had that conversation almost word for word before, sad but true.
I absolutley loved the way you opened this chapter wit Jaspers POV. The Jasper/Charlie conversation was perfect!
And OMG the heat you put in your writing. The build up to the "moment" when they get to be together is ... undiscribable. I love your writeing, I am never disappointed!

xD I just want you to know that your updates for this story, are totalloy the freaking highlight of my week!!!!!!!! SQUEEEEEEEEEEE If you end this story soon I will hunt you down and hold you captive until you write me more!!!!! I was gushing so much while reading this chapter! I could hardly keep my butt in my seat!! lol So happy! I see Edward has creeped back in here, I knew it wouldn't be long before he showed up again. Seems like crazyness is creeping up here! xD OMG PLEASE DON'T END THIS STORY ANY TIME SOON! I READ WHAT YOU WROTE AT THE BOTTOM AND MY HEART DROPPED! I AM SO WORRIED NOW THAT YOU WILL END THIS! ITS MY FAVORITE STORY OF ALL TIME! PLEASE PLEASE DON'T END IT AND WRITE MORE SOON, OR I JUST MAY DIE!!!!!

yey! they're together and all loving :D i can't wait for the sex though. make it very detailed please :P. loved this chapter

I love this story!!! Stupid Emmett, why did he have to interrupt them? I do like the brotherly relationship he has with Bella though. Please put up the next chapter soon, I can't wait!