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schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg yesss! finial
talk about a build up to the kiss
but i loved it!
i cant wait for you to update!

LOVEEE IT!
schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you're taking such a long time. :[ i'm going crazzzzy.
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW! That was so hot! and so perfect! WOW! WOW! WOW! and YUM! lol... more, please? :)
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wasn't what I thought it would be, but I still liked it! But, please please please have them talk more about their feelings a bit more. Jasper still hasn't said I love you and Bella should hear that first. Then let the lemmony goodness ensue! And wouldn't that just be a wonderful time for Edward to show back up?....just a thought...;)
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
**Shrieks and squeals** OMG They finally freaking KISSED!!!! Holy smokes, Batman!!! That was so steamy and juicy!!! I loved how you finally worked it out! It was sweet but sexy, and definately passionate! It was perfect! And I thought the bonding with the kids at the hospital was sweet, and that protective Emmett was funny, great, and very believable!! LOVED IT!!!! Great cherry-topper to the day when the New Moon trailer came out!!! Can't wait to see what they'll be doing when they go home alone ;)
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hehe I was on my seat at the end just like "omg omg omg omg omg" It's amazing <3
You MUST update SOON.
person Liberty
schedule May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I cannot believe you stopped it there! That is evil, evil, evil.
schedule May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
amazing story, ma'am. you have me checking constantly for updates. :]
schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you made it perfect;) you are awesome chick!!!
schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well the kiss wasn't that romantic, but at least it was passionate enough ;)
I'm also very happy that they decided to tell each other their feelings!
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